An interesting transition of dofferent elemts, but I like it. Mixing could be done a little better after 0:13 as it is too high and distorts until that sounds fades, but other than that its good.
thanks a lot
nothing is as good as a great feedback
If you mean the noise after 0:13, its for hitler speech
I didnt find a better one to replace
thanks for your great feedback
kindest regards
You think deeply for a guy your age my friend...the human tribes of the earth have fought for most of history...the leaders invent enemies to build armies...which control the people...and keep the corrupt in power...if there were advanced alien civilizations they would likely see humans as a parasite..and parasites always destroy their host (earth)...I was glad to hear the sound of hope at the end for sometimes that is all we have...and must have... and the goodness of most of humanity shows itself in times of need.....music is a wonderful creative way to express feelings...you do it well....so no more self critisizing...your music is composed with thoughtfulness and creativity...well done to you..Ed
Thanks a lot for your meaningful comment
yes you got the story right, it was my hope to help people with this track someday
thats why Im here, on the earth
and thanks a lot for assuming me more than I am while Im just a drop in a sea
best wishes
and kindest regards
J_
You see the world not like a 17 years old...respect for this...very deep composition with cool musical attitude...technically, you could receive some helping information, I hope cause the whole production is a bit overgained...I'm not good in mixing...
Thanks a lot danke
thanks for your feedback too
can you exactly tell which part is overgained?
and dont even tell this sentences like "im not good" or "im not that good"
you are one of the best musicians in the world in my opinion
You're never too young to think of these ugly world events happening now or in the past history. It's just call 'life'.
And life has many stories to tell and music as such is a great way to express how you feel about them. And you will never run out of ideas too.
It's a blend of cinematic and dance too, perhaps the dance of war I think! And i enjoy the ending bit too with the birds, maybe back to the Garden of Eden and it's peacefullness. Keep it up NJNS.
Thanks for your care man
yes, the earth belongs to us, all of us, and we should help to each other to live here on the best way, for me, actually for all of the looperman members, music is the way
yes its better to call it a psycho trance, thats the real genre
you got it right buddy, my mean is the end part
when there is no human on the earth, and we have just nature, no one knows what will be happend next, is this an end for human?
thank you
Your choice of plucked sound over your beat for first part is very good. It creates tension and also makes room for your war sound effects. The robot section near the end is very fun and sounds cool. It seem you do end on an optimistic note, am I wrong?
Thanks for your care
aa, actually if you listen to robots dialogs
they're saying that we are better than humans and we should attack and kill all the humans
and after the attack, when they killed all humans, they can't live without humans because they need to be charged and being cared.
so nature will capture the world again, and we have just plants, birds and animals... it means the earth is empty of humans and civilization
thank you
Hey NJNS
You can't never be to young to think on the sadness of wars.
Good work and good sound. (first i wanted to write nice work but war isn't nice at all) ......
I love this little baby sound, cause that makes it realy sad to listen to.
This times are realy not good times for humanty but sad and bad things are always inspiration for some good and emotional music.
Hi joe
thank you for listening to my track
and thank you for your comment
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yes the baby sound has a lot of meanings for me, it can be the symbol of human. it can be...
the world is beautiful, but its ugly more... bad things are real
we can't create stair from bad things to go up
If anything is shouting, we are here to make it to be heard
(arent we?)
and now, our world is shouting
thanks for your care
respect & best wishes
Wow yeah this is definitely my style of music. Im loving this track a ton. The pads sound like theyre crying. Real drives home the feeling of emptiness and depression. Love it.
At 18 sec though that chord sounds off-key. May be just me. But other than that this is an instant fave and DL!
I'm a take some time to write to write to it and see what I can I can all ready tell the emotions that can be delivered in that track can be so deep it can make you shake if you really sit there and listen and internalize it
thanks for your comment
if you like to do something with this beat
i can remove that sound at 3:10 and mail you the new version
just give me a mail
regards...
I was rapping off that I like it I was flowing to this funny noise came in it don't need that in there,besides that it's a nice beat that a true artist can put emotion into
lol thanks
yea i just made it long time ago
you're right thats not good it can be changed
if anyone wants to do something with this old track
i promise to change that with something like a sad guitar solo or etc...
on Stop the wars by JasonCroft
nothing is as good as a great feedback
If you mean the noise after 0:13, its for hitler speech
I didnt find a better one to replace
thanks for your great feedback
kindest regards
on 128 seconds to the hell by JasonCroft
kindest regards
J_
on Stop the wars by JasonCroft
yes you got the story right, it was my hope to help people with this track someday
thats why Im here, on the earth
and thanks a lot for assuming me more than I am while Im just a drop in a sea
best wishes
and kindest regards
J_
on Amor mio by JasonCroft
i will be glad
kindest regards__
on Stop the wars by JasonCroft
You see the world not like a 17 years old...respect for this...very deep composition with cool musical attitude...technically, you could receive some helping information, I hope cause the whole production is a bit overgained...I'm not good in mixing...
Though, here is my hand to shake with you, Danke
thanks for your feedback too
can you exactly tell which part is overgained?
and dont even tell this sentences like "im not good" or "im not that good"
you are one of the best musicians in the world in my opinion
thank you
on Stop the wars by JasonCroft
And life has many stories to tell and music as such is a great way to express how you feel about them. And you will never run out of ideas too.
It's a blend of cinematic and dance too, perhaps the dance of war I think! And i enjoy the ending bit too with the birds, maybe back to the Garden of Eden and it's peacefullness. Keep it up NJNS.
Blessings - B.
yes, the earth belongs to us, all of us, and we should help to each other to live here on the best way, for me, actually for all of the looperman members, music is the way
yes its better to call it a psycho trance, thats the real genre
you got it right buddy, my mean is the end part
when there is no human on the earth, and we have just nature, no one knows what will be happend next, is this an end for human?
thank you
on Stop the wars by JasonCroft
aa, actually if you listen to robots dialogs
they're saying that we are better than humans and we should attack and kill all the humans
and after the attack, when they killed all humans, they can't live without humans because they need to be charged and being cared.
so nature will capture the world again, and we have just plants, birds and animals... it means the earth is empty of humans and civilization
thank you
on Stop the wars by JasonCroft
You can't never be to young to think on the sadness of wars.
Good work and good sound. (first i wanted to write nice work but war isn't nice at all) ......
I love this little baby sound, cause that makes it realy sad to listen to.
This times are realy not good times for humanty but sad and bad things are always inspiration for some good and emotional music.
Respect for this one.
stay tuned
joe
thank you for listening to my track
and thank you for your comment
-----
yes the baby sound has a lot of meanings for me, it can be the symbol of human. it can be...
the world is beautiful, but its ugly more... bad things are real
we can't create stair from bad things to go up
If anything is shouting, we are here to make it to be heard
(arent we?)
and now, our world is shouting
thanks for your care
respect & best wishes
on Sadness Of Darkness by JasonCroft
At 18 sec though that chord sounds off-key. May be just me. But other than that this is an instant fave and DL!
Awesome job on this.
hats off...
on Sadness Of Darkness by JasonCroft
on Sadness Of Darkness by JasonCroft
hats off...
on Sadness Of Darkness by JasonCroft
hats off...
on Sadness Of Darkness by JasonCroft
hats off
on Sadness Of Darkness by JasonCroft
im glad you liked it and i think you can do it on the best way
however you wrote "to write" and "I can" in your first line two times xD
on Story of my heart by JasonCroft
if you like to do something with this beat
i can remove that sound at 3:10 and mail you the new version
just give me a mail
regards...
on Story of my heart by JasonCroft
and hope you like it and do something with this beat
regards
on Story of my heart by JasonCroft
But all in all a realy good made hiphop track!
Greetz GalaX
yea i just made it long time ago
you're right thats not good it can be changed
if anyone wants to do something with this old track
i promise to change that with something like a sad guitar solo or etc...
on 128 seconds to the hell by JasonCroft
Hats off, Danke
Im glad you liked it