Oiiiiiiiii!....love the way the high end morphs into the bass...the kick is harsh too, very punchy...Nice use of filters in this one...I like this...keep doing what you do best...
hey thanks for the review the lead is from FL's sytrus. You aren't the only one complaining about the end lol
In the end i will have to change it I think
Nice synth beats good as well, flows nicely and has a nice rhythm too. Any of them loops/samples, or was i all your making?
Nice Work, keep it up.
Pce
Steve
The synth in the background..
Why soo subdued? the strings/pad? dude... YOu soo read music.
You have song setup nailed, but changing up the key along with both the arp and stuff would take this to the next level.
SUPER star. lmao.. I am a nerd.
I think the synth and then taking whatever the baseline is and going 7 notes down on the 1st down beat.... something like that... It will cause some tension and change the track...
BUT despite my criticism, You know I am a fan, your music is soo straight up and well produced. I love the soft/punchy arp and then the hard synth.
AWESOME.
Man, I'm really impressed. These are 1 by 1 great tracks, especially this one, sounds super... ;) I think you have a bright future ahead... Keep up the good work!!!
yer totally agree with ryckio, but there is a point where you can't keep refining, because you just get to critical of it, so once your happy with it just leave it!
but yer, i like the tune, its simple and has great elements in it. ditto to eshar, id bust a move on this baby HAHAHA
Thanks mate
I prefer to leave my old tracks as they are cause i work on em till i get satisfied and by that i'm usually getting bored too and don't wanna touch em as long i don't feel like i can surely improve them.
I love this track a lot, but I'm not sure about the bit that comes in at 1:11 ish, the second [or third] note just doesn't sound right and it could do with some delay or reverb, the pad is perfect but maybe a bit quiet other than that a very good track with great production. Keep it up.
Thanks, I'm not sure about that but i don't think delay would do any good and reeverb would only add some more air not fix it. About the pad you may be right too but i didn't want it to drown other sounds. I'm glad you took your time to listen and review :)
i like your track as well,everyone has there own taste in music.
for me i'm into melodeys bridges breaks etc,but thats my style.
you have a gift,why aren't you out there making money with that gift.i'm not much into hihats that much,but your hihats fit well
with your song.i dont like to critisize other peoples projects.
when they write their music it comes from how they feel and how they express thoughs feelings.thats what makes trance and dance music so much fun to write.
keep up the good work.cheers mate
Charles Micheal Douglas
aka-Radium X
Thanks mate totally agreed. I just try to tell what I expect and prefer as a listener in order to give some ideas or ways to refine their work but of course in the end it's all about producers taste.
ok... i know.. i know.. i don't GET trance music..
U need to up the 10 k (H) frequencies.
(Remember that k and (H) which means TREBLE)
You know?
The 10,000 ...
at 20k you have just earth quake.. that is why rappers and trance enthusiasts like it. At 20khz you have hiss and cymbal.
(you have obviously forbidden them at 40)
but... CAREFUL... who has subs like that? no one........
I think you have this awesome spiral of mid.. Right??
can you mix treble in a way that would coexist with that ???
like a sidechain HIGH??? hahahhahahahhahah
ttyl dude.
I heard your trak a couple of times. Very good arrangements, keep up the good work. You got a very good sound. My advice, keep revising and refining it. Listen it more and more and look ways to enhance it. :)
-Ryck
I think this is your best tune so far!! That's my opinion anyway..
The melody line was really catchy and its the sort of song I could easily dance to in a club! It has a really good groove that just keeps on bobbing away!!
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Great track though!
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I'm glad you liked it
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Splish
Glad you liked it
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what happened...???
Nice track!! Just think you need to expand on it more!!!
Nice1!
Thx for your review
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nice beats, hip hop vibe. great melodies.
but agree with alivid needs some bass pads in there, that would be icing on the cake!
well done bro!!
\m/
PEACE!
Brent
on Young & Free :D by Avail
There are plenty of crazy rappers..
Hahahahh, you wanna rap on this and I will rap with you.
That will RUIN this track. We should do it!
Dude you got talent!
I want more bass! I am gonna look at this, and I love the track!
You rock!
And the bass thing is easy to solve dont worry about it :D
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the lead synth is great! did you use a vst-insturment? and if so, which one? i've been looking for for one for ages now, but i can't find one.
the only thing that annoys me is the end...why do you fade this awesoe lead out slowly and not let this whole great track end in a ==*BANG*==?
In the end i will have to change it I think
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Nice Work, keep it up.
Pce
Steve
^^
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Why soo subdued? the strings/pad? dude... YOu soo read music.
You have song setup nailed, but changing up the key along with both the arp and stuff would take this to the next level.
SUPER star. lmao.. I am a nerd.
I think the synth and then taking whatever the baseline is and going 7 notes down on the 1st down beat.... something like that... It will cause some tension and change the track...
BUT despite my criticism, You know I am a fan, your music is soo straight up and well produced. I love the soft/punchy arp and then the hard synth.
AWESOME.
FUCK YAH.
tee hee
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Grtz Jan
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yer totally agree with ryckio, but there is a point where you can't keep refining, because you just get to critical of it, so once your happy with it just leave it!
but yer, i like the tune, its simple and has great elements in it. ditto to eshar, id bust a move on this baby HAHAHA
keep it up mate!
B.S
I prefer to leave my old tracks as they are cause i work on em till i get satisfied and by that i'm usually getting bored too and don't wanna touch em as long i don't feel like i can surely improve them.
Babe? The tune or...? LOL kidding, thanks again
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for me i'm into melodeys bridges breaks etc,but thats my style.
you have a gift,why aren't you out there making money with that gift.i'm not much into hihats that much,but your hihats fit well
with your song.i dont like to critisize other peoples projects.
when they write their music it comes from how they feel and how they express thoughs feelings.thats what makes trance and dance music so much fun to write.
keep up the good work.cheers mate
Charles Micheal Douglas
aka-Radium X
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on Sidechained Zombie? lol by Avail
ok... i know.. i know.. i don't GET trance music..
U need to up the 10 k (H) frequencies.
(Remember that k and (H) which means TREBLE)
You know?
The 10,000 ...
at 20k you have just earth quake.. that is why rappers and trance enthusiasts like it. At 20khz you have hiss and cymbal.
(you have obviously forbidden them at 40)
but... CAREFUL... who has subs like that? no one........
I think you have this awesome spiral of mid.. Right??
can you mix treble in a way that would coexist with that ???
like a sidechain HIGH??? hahahhahahahhahah
ttyl dude.
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-Ryck
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well done
Trax
on Sidechained Zombie? lol by Avail
The melody line was really catchy and its the sort of song I could easily dance to in a club! It has a really good groove that just keeps on bobbing away!!
Very nice!!
Thanks for your review ^^