JohnKnelsen

I was surprised, I expected these tracks to be someone reciting an essay or a poem. You created some dope tracks. You blazed your own unique way. vic a.k.a. vigwig

This is 100% hip hop. You have a solid beat, and some bars, only thing different is your flow. It's unique, different. We need more unique stuff like this.

Now this is something new to me hmm * spoken word * first time i have seen it. But still i could appreciate it in a way. It did sound interesting that's for sure. So yeah good job. And thanks for getting me acquainted with this genre. Guess there is a first time for everything right?

Dig the lyrical flow, short little bursts, kinda gives a unpredictable sense in where it keeps you guessing where you'll go. Things might not be so great, but this song is :)

You know, its rarely i see or hear a potential good artist in the making, and i rarely give someone 2 listens in a visit on this site.

But you are an exception, i really do love your poetic vocals in a calm collective musical setting like a mellow piano track.

I do hope to run into you again on future tracks, i really like your style at this moment.

Congrats, and maybe some day you can speak on my tracks lol...

Good job

Digital-J

This is a awesome track that i very much like. It gets straight into it and the music is like a poetic story. Spoken word is something i like in music, it captures the story and this track is not over powering or underperformed.

Really love it, great work, keep up this, I love to hear more of this creativity.

Digital-J

wow, reminded me Eminem HAHAHA

Awesome work on this art form. really deep track.

What a gem of a track! Took me two listens to get into it. But i keep picturing Eminem on the vocals though lol...
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