JohnKnelsen

Hypeee! I loved how you basically flowed and rolled on the beat near the end! ("How else would you measure when under pressure, if you're gonna break, you give way to the tension!" was hy p pe for me!) And also along with CAP's rap and FI-WURK's production, beat was hype, flow was neat, placed down nicely, and had me bopping! I like your style! I (only slightly, but personally) wanted to hear CAP pop at the end of your part with his "No Joke" part (it's just me haha but I still love the ending!) Good work!

I like unorthodox rap flows, when a rapper has the command to rap on and off the natural cadence of the beat at will. And the lyrics/whole song is meaningful too so great job. Nice beat selection too.

BEAST MODE ^666

Very, Very deep lyrics....i can respect the art as it is doing what its designed to do, thats the beauty of this thing called music...is to move your spirit, but while it has been taken into different grounds and totally misunderstood and misused as a weapon, there are some who get it..!! the beauty of music is the vocal and not the sound of material clinging together, but the voice of a being with or without a mic......mothers sing their babys to sleep.....without a piano or drums...nice work Johnny6, i applaud you on real musical art that speaks, not just sound good or catchy, but has meaning. Larry

I liked it you got talent, keep going it only takes one. great job!!

Boom! your style is singular, although at first it reminded me to Eminem's. But after 30 sec I've begun to appreciate it as your own. good job!

This is awesome! You remind me of Eminem a little bit! I'm glad you could use this!

Brado

Deep!! awesome work. Larry

funny how in Swedish god means good and so yeah god is good :)

Ok. So dont take anything as a negative as I am a very critical listener. Plus, I feel as if the goal is to uplift folks. Comments are just people’s personal opinions and preferences.

1. Im a big time believer in Jesus.

2. I really wanted the vocal more up front.

3. Obviously love the message.

Good job.

Nice bro, this is amazing and Fire! I can't wait until i record my first audio and if you want to listen to more beats by yourstruly,
my soundcloud is https://soundcloud.com/user-163291048

- Yitiao

keep up your amazing work
bless
-CAP

I get an underground feel, and i love it, this is awesome bro!

I was surprised, I expected these tracks to be someone reciting an essay or a poem. You created some dope tracks. You blazed your own unique way. vic a.k.a. vigwig

This is 100% hip hop. You have a solid beat, and some bars, only thing different is your flow. It's unique, different. We need more unique stuff like this.

Now this is something new to me hmm * spoken word * first time i have seen it. But still i could appreciate it in a way. It did sound interesting that's for sure. So yeah good job. And thanks for getting me acquainted with this genre. Guess there is a first time for everything right?

Dig the lyrical flow, short little bursts, kinda gives a unpredictable sense in where it keeps you guessing where you'll go. Things might not be so great, but this song is :)

You know, its rarely i see or hear a potential good artist in the making, and i rarely give someone 2 listens in a visit on this site.

But you are an exception, i really do love your poetic vocals in a calm collective musical setting like a mellow piano track.

I do hope to run into you again on future tracks, i really like your style at this moment.

Congrats, and maybe some day you can speak on my tracks lol...

Good job

Digital-J

This is a awesome track that i very much like. It gets straight into it and the music is like a poetic story. Spoken word is something i like in music, it captures the story and this track is not over powering or underperformed.

Really love it, great work, keep up this, I love to hear more of this creativity.

Digital-J

wow, reminded me Eminem HAHAHA

Awesome work on this art form. really deep track.

What a gem of a track! Took me two listens to get into it. But i keep picturing Eminem on the vocals though lol...
I met a lady today that said that a Christian walk is not an instant thing, but you begin again as a baby, to a teen, a young man then finally to a mature adult, as you battle the carnal desires of the world and flesh. Thanks for sharing your soul man.
Blessings - B.