YOU REALLY NEED A STUDIO. You need lay verse professionally. This track hits home. Both of you are talented. Great work. That sample though... SICK. It brings that old Jim Crow's Ice Cream Parlor feeling to mind.
I know I am kind of late. DOPE FLOW. You may need a pop filter or some equalization because the plosives make the track lose quality. The chorus has this weird rumbling in it in the lower frequencies. But overall I like the track. I just feel like with a title like Revolution it would have more impact and content instead of punchlines(nice punchline though). I have problems with all the things I have stated so I am not trying to point you out I am just trying to help. but again NICE WORK keep it up. I wanted to listen to more though.
The track emphasizes how people will forgo doing the responsible thing, which is maintaining their livelihoods to get faded each and every day, while others will get high each and every day in pursuit of their livelihoods, it's quite ironic, but so true...why close the lesser when both can be accomplished at the same time....cool track!
Idk what the concept is about...getting chopped? lol That's what i'm bout to do in a few though so i can't blame you, but maybe I just don't get it right now. Chill track, beat is knocking and lyrics is on point too. Not bad, but yea explain that message to me though. peace
I ain't got time 4 this comment, but you earned it....direct and to the point ole skoole vibe...love the feel and flow of the lyrics....nice rap tone...
You know their is so much music out there,but the joints you put out just stand out.You are a lyrical beast man.I enjoy your stuff.This is tight right here.
I'm listening to this and i'm feeling good good good.
Your tune is good, your mix is clean and most importantly you sound good as well.
I'm a bit envious of you guys (and girls) with lyric writing skills.
I can't pick fault with this tune.
Good work.
FR
Really smooth track man. The only thing I would comment on would be the mastering in the chorus, which could use a bit more tweaking. Really well done.
Another blunt song.....yeah right....really it's crisp clean vocals, njce beat that flows and the both work together!
I gotta grab the DL....good work!
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Your tune is good, your mix is clean and most importantly you sound good as well.
I'm a bit envious of you guys (and girls) with lyric writing skills.
I can't pick fault with this tune.
Good work.
FR
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I gotta grab the DL....good work!
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