I like this one, it´s quirky and fun has some eighties sensibilities. If you could inch the vox slightly down in the mix, and lower the reverb also a little bit as it drowns out the rest of the instruments. Bass is fine, need just a bit of warmth in the middle. It might also be the overdriven chiptune sounds that are also causing it all to sound clustered. I completely agree with henry as he is spot on with his original synopsis. This is a good tune worth the time it will take to get it perfect. I do really like it.
Cro
Thanks for the feedback! :)
I have changed this song a lot of times xD
I am not sure if I can do a better job then what I have right now to be honest, the project has a loooot of tracks, different sounds and stuff, It was kinda hard to keep all of them 100% hearable.
As far as my current skills can bring me, I think this is the max :)
Very nice idea, fantastic atmosphere created, the voice seems to come directly from the 80s, and more precisely from Patsy Kensit from Eight Wonder!
Technically, however, there are several things to fix. First of all the eq of the volumes, the voice is too dominant and, as already written, too full of reverb. Despite using headphones of excellent quality such the I-phone ones, I do not hear the bass (the low frequencies generally), the drums are too weak. Maybe you could opt to saturate them if you don't want them to be too prominent.
The general mix mastering should be reviewed, as your track is, however, has that vintage flavor that is definitely a positive aspect.
I have not selected as a favorite just for the audio quality, but I believe you can do your best to improve it.
Judging from this track, your album promises great things. I'd like to listen to it!
Thank you for your feedback,
I too heard somethings that were not as they should be,
but in the past few listened to it a loooooot of times, and
I became a bit ''deaf'' to Eqs and basically everything.
I have changed a lot so it sounds more how it should be in my opinion.
I like it. I think there is a little too much reverb on the vocal. or if you want reverb really thick, you can duck the reverb to clear up the vocal and keep the lush long verbs. Very cool and original. The ending is tied up nicely.
Beautiful voice.
I like the way you have wrapped it in the mellow and gentle muzical cocoon.
It's delicate and peaceful., mesmerizes and draws you in and before you know it the song is over.
Job well done by both of you!
Yeah sure I can make an acapella, but I can only give you this exact version wich is edited by me.
If you want the raw original version you have to ask Ashesndreams her permission yourseld, since it is her work.
I will try to compile and upload it tomorrow and will let you know when I did :)
Very ambient vibe, I've been in an ambient mood. You know what this song reminds me of, the soundtrack to Macross Plus. Fantastic work, I wish you the best on your album.
Not gonna lie was hesitant at first cause I don't know about pop. This is a pretty solid track tho. Nice vocals to accompany a well put together music track.
Thank you man, my secret is when u finish a track, put the wav it into a new project, and change the BPM a bit so that the track will go faster plus higher in pitch (you have to enable re-pitch)
Now this was a pleasant surprise to listen to. A very good song indeed. I did digged it all the way. Everything seems to be well balanced out. When it comes to the use of elements, the vocal part as well the mixing part. So yeah i was prety surprised by this track. In a pleasant way that is. So yeah a solid track indeed. Which deserves also a place among my fav list. I will be curious what you have planned out for the next track. This sure was a very nice and a good one. Also the genre that is more suitable for these kind of music would be chillout. Cause it has a lot of those elements in it. Instead of the pop ones. So yeah a job very well done. Have a good one, and keep on creating & listening, Verdi
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Anyway, you didn't still get the right eq/comp/mix/mast.
At the moment, i can't because of my hand injure, but i would like to make my remix of this, one day.
yeah I always have trouble with mixing a song if I have a lot of tracks in one project, specially this track the gets louder and louder near the end.
One day I will get it I am sure :)
Tnx for the feedback!
Cheers!
~Eighteen
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Cheers!
~Eighteen
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Cro
I have changed this song a lot of times xD
I am not sure if I can do a better job then what I have right now to be honest, the project has a loooot of tracks, different sounds and stuff, It was kinda hard to keep all of them 100% hearable.
As far as my current skills can bring me, I think this is the max :)
~Eighteen
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on 02 Youll be Alive ft LeoValentine by Eighteen
on 02 Youll be Alive ft LeoValentine by Eighteen
~Eighteen
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Rijswijk de braafstuuuuh! XD
~Eighteen
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Technically, however, there are several things to fix. First of all the eq of the volumes, the voice is too dominant and, as already written, too full of reverb. Despite using headphones of excellent quality such the I-phone ones, I do not hear the bass (the low frequencies generally), the drums are too weak. Maybe you could opt to saturate them if you don't want them to be too prominent.
The general mix mastering should be reviewed, as your track is, however, has that vintage flavor that is definitely a positive aspect.
I have not selected as a favorite just for the audio quality, but I believe you can do your best to improve it.
Judging from this track, your album promises great things. I'd like to listen to it!
I too heard somethings that were not as they should be,
but in the past few listened to it a loooooot of times, and
I became a bit ''deaf'' to Eqs and basically everything.
I have changed a lot so it sounds more how it should be in my opinion.
Thanks man! and have a nice day!
~Eighteen
on 02 Youll be Alive ft LeoValentine by Eighteen
I have cleaned up the song a bit as of now!
Have a nice day!
~Eighteen
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Bravoooooooo!
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I like the way you have wrapped it in the mellow and gentle muzical cocoon.
It's delicate and peaceful., mesmerizes and draws you in and before you know it the song is over.
Job well done by both of you!
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I appreciate ^^
Cheers!
~Eighteen
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Yeah sure I can make an acapella, but I can only give you this exact version wich is edited by me.
If you want the raw original version you have to ask Ashesndreams her permission yourseld, since it is her work.
I will try to compile and upload it tomorrow and will let you know when I did :)
Cheers!
~Eighteen
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Cheers!
~Eighteen
on 01 Before Long ft Ashesndreams by Eighteen
Greatly appreciated!
~Eighteen
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Cheers!
~Eighteen
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Oh wow yes this is totally up my alley, thank you for the compliment!
Also thank you for giving me the nice music tip xD
kind regards,
~Eighteen
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I'm happy it is very well received.
Cheers!
~Eighteen
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Cheers!
~Eighteen
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That and little bit of EQ and Compression :)
Thanks for the listen!
~Eighteen
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Now this was a pleasant surprise to listen to. A very good song indeed. I did digged it all the way. Everything seems to be well balanced out. When it comes to the use of elements, the vocal part as well the mixing part. So yeah i was prety surprised by this track. In a pleasant way that is. So yeah a solid track indeed. Which deserves also a place among my fav list. I will be curious what you have planned out for the next track. This sure was a very nice and a good one. Also the genre that is more suitable for these kind of music would be chillout. Cause it has a lot of those elements in it. Instead of the pop ones. So yeah a job very well done. Have a good one, and keep on creating & listening, Verdi
Thank you for the nice comment!
Very happy to hear it is received so well.
About the genre, I'm always unsure what genre to put my creations, since it's always a bit different on certain points within a track.
Anyhoo stay tuned for the next track I'll make :)
No release date yet though. This track took me around 2 months to make.
Cheers! And have a good one!
~Eighteen
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~Eighteen
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