Nice Intro. That first Break is awesome. I think the mix of Ashendreams vocals are slightly off in the key. I have worked with her vox before and it´s very difficult due to her soft delivery. The Music is awesome. The vocals are just off enough and need a slight bit bit of pitch correction. I keep wanting to boost her pitch up a half cent. Keep at this one and I think you could make this one work, I have faith that you have the right idea, just a little tweak in execution.
all the best
Cru
cool, well thought out arrangement. Like Reggaeton Vapourware. The title fits the sound. I would like to hear you not follow the melody and bass lines so exactly. Explore counterpoint in your songs and you will be pleasantly surprised. Nice Job
Cru
Henry and Crucethus are giving great advice. That transition at 1:02 is awesome. The music fits the vocals really well. The effects you have, especially in the outro, sound great. I like that you didn't overuse them. I'm excited to hear the final version.
Thank you very much :)
Yesterday I heared 3 of your songs and the melodies that you sing are fenominal!
I cant reply to them so I am happy that I had a chance to tell u that! :)
on 05 Life on the Mindscape by Eighteen
This is a track is beautiful.
Really well-made mate.
Brilliant
Well done.
Cheers!
~Eighteen
on 05 Life on the Mindscape by Eighteen
hats off, Danke
Cheers!
~Eighteen
on 05 Life on the Mindscape by Eighteen
Cheers!
~Eighteen
on 05 Life on the Mindscape by Eighteen
I've uploaded everything so far at looperman:
01 Before Long Ft Ashesndreams - https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/212497
02 Youll Be Alive Ft LeoValentine - https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/214473
03 Starchild Interlude - https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/216420
04 The Star Mother Ft Ashesndreams - https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/217653
05 Life On The Mindscape - right here
Cheers!
~Eighteen
on 04 The Star Mother ft Ashesndreams by Eighteen
all the best
Cru
U have a very good ear, the half tone off sound is intentional, at least in this song, to give it a darker feel. :) and thus I will not change it.
Many thanks for the critics and the listen my friend :)
Cheers!
~Eighteen
on 04 The Star Mother ft Ashesndreams by Eighteen
CHEERS!!
~EIGHTEEN
on 04 The Star Mother ft Ashesndreams by Eighteen
I never listened to muse so I have to believe your word for it :)
Thanks for the listen!
Cheers!
~Eighteen
on 04 The Star Mother ft Ashesndreams by Eighteen
Thanks for the listen!
Cheers!
~Eighteen
on 04 The Star Mother ft Ashesndreams by Eighteen
~Eighteen
on 04 The Star Mother ft Ashesndreams by Eighteen
PEACE...
Thanks for the listen!
Cheers!
~Eighteen
on 04 The Star Mother ft Ashesndreams by Eighteen
Like the guitars at the beginning :)
Cheers!
~Eighteen
on 04 Waiting Thinking Calling ft Mhyst And Venuslove by Eighteen
on 03 Starchild Interlude by Eighteen
Cru
on 03 Starchild Interlude by Eighteen
Thanks for the listen!
Cheers!
~Eighteen
on 03 Starchild Interlude by Eighteen
~Eighteen
on 03 Starchild Interlude by Eighteen
on 03 Starchild Interlude by Eighteen
Cheers!
~Eighteen
on 02 Youll be Alive ft LeoValentine by Eighteen
on 02 Youll be Alive ft LeoValentine by Eighteen
Cheers!
~Eighteen
on 02 Youll be Alive ft LeoValentine by Eighteen
Yesterday I heared 3 of your songs and the melodies that you sing are fenominal!
I cant reply to them so I am happy that I had a chance to tell u that! :)
I liked all 3 of the songs if I am not mistaken.
Cheers!
~Eighteen
on 02 Youll be Alive ft LeoValentine by Eighteen
"My version is so much better than yours" ahahahhahahahhaha
Wait for tomorrow and get surprised!
Yeah for sure next song will be less layers.
And I've heard your song by now and yes I was frickin surpriced :p haha awesome man!
on 02 Youll be Alive ft LeoValentine by Eighteen
Yeah that name describes my work perfectly, most of the time :)
Thanks!
~Eighteen
on 02 Youll be Alive ft LeoValentine by Eighteen
Thanks for the listen!
Cheers!
~Eighteen
on 02 Youll be Alive ft LeoValentine by Eighteen
~Eighteen
on 02 Youll be Alive ft LeoValentine by Eighteen
Sorry.
Why don't you give me the vocals, so i can remix this?
Private mail send.
~Eighteen