Damian999

Wow what a vocal! Really well put together track not my bag, but well cool, cheers Slap...

Amazing job
I wish my music was this good esp for a first track.the vocals and music are plain and simple
amazing.

I find it hard to do rock tracks much lesss metal tracks

much respect,and i like your music alot.

Worthy is one of the best tracks I've ever heard. Nice work, my friend.

Xhi

yes, that's indeed very interesting, especially for a very first track ....
thx for using my guitar loop, it's cool to hear it speeded up that way!!
I would recommend to work a little on the balance of your tracks, the vocals are very loud and dominate the music too much (I think they even clip on some points, maybe this happens on the recording??)....

over all your tracks are very creative and real good (from my point of view) .... great stuff!!
the breaks are excellent, good choice of sounds ..... like it!!!

peace, rei

I only wish I could make out what you were saying better. Probably would have been easier if I didn't have to battle the horde of demons you conjured, but thats the price you pay for listening to dark metal. Hey... Sorry, one of the little ones just bit me on the ankle. Guess what's for dinner :-)

John

industrilicous

you have to tell me how you did the vocals. Seriously, you have to :-) lol

Nice job

John59

999 eh? Does that mean you're evil when ya do handstands?? hehe This track is wicked man... love the guitars and electro together. For a first track this is tight... really enjoyed! ~Lisa

like everyone has said this is fairly well done for a first track. Not really my style either, but i can still appreciate the effort!

some pointers-- The guitar sounds a little cheap, although it could sound better by just messing with the equalizer. Throw more bass in that!

keep it up!

Tell me do you have to be back in the coffin by dawn?...Seriously, if this is your first foray...big thumbs up...I would've liked a stronger deeper bass line but that's only my spin............next time I'm bringing my hard hat!...........cheers planet

I like the way you think. For a first track, this is great. johnnygadget put it best. Long live DMIG! Soon we'll be seeing you alongside Dethklok. Rock on.

I can see it now all black tractor trailers as far as the eye can see loaded on flatbeds with industrial 55 gal. drums full of industrial grunge to be poured on the world to transform the environment to a post apociliptic heavy metal fusion !!!!!!!

Well done for a first track I think its alot better then my first track and mine didnt even have vocals.Keep up the good work!