Same as sunnydas said about effect for the voice. I like the instrument in background used nice sound. I like the voice/rap too, cool rythmic. I can remix your voice, send me a wetransfer link =) (free of course and you keep the files and rights)
Thanks for the compliment man. I agree the pan is skewed. It was an error in recording but I put it up to show a friend and have been to busy to rework it. The vocals are recorded poorly and I have no experience in mastering tracks which would explain the change in volume. I am working on getting around people with more experience. I have to many other hobbies to focus on learning how to master tracks at this time. Thanks for the constructive criticism family, best of luck in all you endeavors.
Commented on Sleep Walking Produced by Mproblmz by SpiritualFoenix
Same as sunnydas said about effect for the voice.
I like the instrument in background used nice sound.
I like the voice/rap too, cool rythmic.
I can remix your voice, send me a wetransfer link =) (free of course and you keep the files and rights)
Commented on Sleep Walking Produced by Mproblmz by SpiritualFoenix
Dope track SpiritualFoenix! The beat is laid back and the flows are sick. This one's a Fav. Nice work.
Commented on Sleep Walking Produced by Mproblmz by SpiritualFoenix
put a compressor or limiter on the vocals, Eq out anything under 150 Hz and boost the higher frequencies a bit more for clarity. great track bro
Commented on Sleep Walking Produced by Mproblmz by SpiritualFoenix
Totally dig the music! Totally dig the lyrics! Well put together, chilled vibe, despite being a rough cut.
Wayne
Commented on Sleep Walking Produced by Mproblmz by SpiritualFoenix
Nice track, I like it. Definitely worth mastering
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Deep lyrics.
Commented on Sleep Walking Produced by Mproblmz by SpiritualFoenix
Wow, this is some cool, smooth hip hop.
The right panned vocal is strange choice but it gives things a different character. I'd definitely centre it but maybe just leave it as it is.
I like the very first organ notes and then the 0:11 hummed vocal. Maybe violin mixed in too there?
Then classic hip hop beats and this is all very atmospheric. Good, poetic vocal.
0:46 sort of harp I recognise from somewhere else. Where does it come from?
1:09 very cool violin, I think. Lovely tone.
This would be fine as an instrumental.
2:25 why does the vocal get louder at this point?
Anyway, great stuff. Except I hate the alarm clock at the end - just because I hate that sound! But I understand why it's there...
Commented on Sleep Walking Produced by Mproblmz by SpiritualFoenix
This track is dope, your vocals are smooth, beats are good...good job man.
Keep it up.
Dj Swindla
Commented on Sleep Walking Produced by Mproblmz by SpiritualFoenix
i'll mastering your track, just sent me the file
sorry my bad english
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This is really great. Lyrics are pretty dope! I would not pan the vocal so much to the left though.
Commented on Sleep Walking Produced by Mproblmz by SpiritualFoenix
fokin awesome !!!
Commented on Worlds Crazy by SpiritualFoenix
cool track
Commented on Worlds Crazy by SpiritualFoenix
Keep at it bro, good job