Satanic/volcanic is some quality rhyming. Your skills impress me.
Nice use of delay, as well. It does a good job of obscuring everything you say. I did make out a "Shit" and a "Bitch", so you have all the main parts present.
Good work! I hope to hear more like this from you in the future.
Thanks Evan...
Here are some lyrics I wrote that I'm wantting to put down on another rock or metal track.
I'm the evil that sleeps
that creeps up on you
I don't speak, I spit venom
unhinge this torment upon you
My jealousy and greed is what feeds my anger
I'm my own worst enemy
when it comes to blood
I'm spillin it
Life is short and so is time
so I'm killin it............
on Call Me Poetry Project 1 by PoetryIsMyName
on Call Me Poetry Project 1 by PoetryIsMyName
on Just Call Me Poetry by PoetryIsMyName
Satanic/volcanic is some quality rhyming. Your skills impress me.
Nice use of delay, as well. It does a good job of obscuring everything you say. I did make out a "Shit" and a "Bitch", so you have all the main parts present.
Good work! I hope to hear more like this from you in the future.
Evan
Here are some lyrics I wrote that I'm wantting to put down on another rock or metal track.
I'm the evil that sleeps
that creeps up on you
I don't speak, I spit venom
unhinge this torment upon you
My jealousy and greed is what feeds my anger
I'm my own worst enemy
when it comes to blood
I'm spillin it
Life is short and so is time
so I'm killin it............
on TheReTuRn by PoetryIsMyName
on You Told Me by PoetryIsMyName
I appreciate it. I'm still working on this one and hopefully I can do more with it