Everything in this song just simply works together. Nothing clashes and the vocals are amazing. It's a bit tough to make out the lyrics so maybe that could be a small complaint, but that's pretty much it. Awesome song
I think you've started something really potentially great here. But for me the vocals are lost. I can't understand them. I think they're too deep in the piano. To me, there are two instruments here, the piano and vocal, that need to be equal. But now I think the vocal is being overwhelmed by the piano. Maybe play with horizontal placement across the listening spectrum. Just a suggestion, because I think you're onto something here but it needs a bit more massaging.
It's hard to disagree with you, as the song is no where near finished, but also wasn't sure if it was worth finishing. But now I'm thinking I might re-record after receiving such good feedback.
Thanks for taking the time out to listen and comment, really appreciated :)
Thank you very much. It helps that there are such good instrumentals out there for me to play with, otherwise I'd still be singing Christmas carols to myself :)
You did a really good job with this song. It sounded a lot like something that Pink Floyd would put out. The overall overtone of this song as really dark, which I really like. I look forward to hearing more stuff like this from you.
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And you're not the only one to mention the clarity of the lyrics, but I'm working on it!
Appreciate you stopping by and taking the time out to comment :]
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Compliments and respect_____Orlando
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What are the odds of me getting you to do a hook for me?
Loved this piece, wish it was longer.
T2
I don't have a lot of time on my hands, so I couldn't turn a hook round for you very quickly, but I'm willing to give it a shot.
Get in touch through the site, and we'll see if something can be done :)
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What are the odds of me getting you to do a hook for me?
Loved this piece, wish it was longer.
T2
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i think i will explain better my feeling in french lol
No matter, it's a real good track! congrates for this brilliant work
Bleep
It's quite humbling as it's not the first time someone has mentioned Ping Floyd, although I don't for one second compare myself.
Still, can't deny that I had a little smile to myself :)
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And would love to see anything that you create with it, so please stop by with a link to your video if it makes it in :)
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It's hard to disagree with you, as the song is no where near finished, but also wasn't sure if it was worth finishing. But now I'm thinking I might re-record after receiving such good feedback.
Thanks for taking the time out to listen and comment, really appreciated :)
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And I really hope to do more like this, it's just a case of finding the right music and keep practicing. Fingers crossed :)
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on I Died A Little by mildperil
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You see https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hfJCjSf6Kk8
The link to the original can be found in the description, but I enjoyed the video nonetheless :)
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Always appreciated :)
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I would love to make a song that is at once dark and beautiful/ethereal, so I guess I'm halfway there :)
Thanks for stopping by and commenting, means a lot.