Well for a first attempt it has some good elements but one minute it's acoustic, the next minute it's techno and then, well i don't know what. You need to decide what your tracks going to be and stick to that genre.
FR
I like your unique delivery kind of a sing song style. Love the message of the track. Lyrics are interesting and on point. Unique beat as well. I hear the confidence in your voice keep pluggin...
Nothing about this is hardstyle. Not trying to be a jerk but hardstyle is usually around 150 bpm, insane distorted and overdriven kicks with euphoric trance leads.
Hey this isn't too bad the big thing that I am noticing is that the volume of the vocals and certain parts of the track are wobbling like crazy. It may be over compressed and there could be some eq issues as well. Other than that its a good track.
Yeah, learning to EQ and master stuff is on my to do list. Thanks for the input. Once I learn that stuff, I'll revisit this, and try to make it better.
I Like it man... aint nothing wrong with this.. maybe the mixing / arrangement. i would create some more drum patterns, maybe change the drumkit.. you know, try to do something different on each verse with the drums.. even if it's just for 1 bar..
on 1st attempt at hardstyle beat by emit
FR
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Kyle
Yeah, learning to EQ and master stuff is on my to do list. Thanks for the input. Once I learn that stuff, I'll revisit this, and try to make it better.
on Unfinished beat featuring MistaMista by emit
I like the sounds you use. And nice finish. ^^