PROPHET1

You are an absolutely terrible rapper. please dont ever do this again for the better of the population.

did u make the instrumental yourself? and wen u say "all i need is a lighter" u should swap lighter with either ho, or blow. i know it doesnt have anythin to do with smokin but it would sound smoother. Constructive critisizm man, peace

Yo you got some shyte going on in ya brain fa-sho, demented, base rock, type shyte... You got a coo little swagger on there, It'z coo... Peep out some Brotha Lynch cd'z he rappin on that baby eaten type shyte to, do ya thing boi... 100

now thats a hiphop beat and the lyrics pop!
synth is genius
i feel bad now that i remixed "f@ck you" lol
great work prophet1!!!!!!!!!
signed in no time if not yet!
mad respect...gizz
[EDIT]*-thanks for the download. drinkin bud and jammin 2 yer toon..sweet!

sweet arrangement/structure
excellent work!
loved working with your lyrics..got skillz budz
respect-gizz.

cut some mid freq out the bass, love the spit and the orcestral hits,could use a melody hook.good work

nice...great start!
someone will really need to step up to fly with this.
cant wait to hear the finished
gizz.

I like the direction it's headed in. Interesting lyrics

this is the best one ive heard out you cause your telling a story...remeber thats the best hip hop, im downloading this joint right now.
the beat is sick. goodnfuckin job.

ya im bobbin my head right now, you use reason at all? i like that mello tron string soundin thing

this is sick too. i like youe style

this is ill, what influences you? hip hop 101, the truth.

Sum Good stuff...

NIce track. Feelin that beat and them lyrics. Tight!

Hey man laid ur vocals over a track for the song fuck u get at me

It may be sumthin different from wat u usually do but its hot keep up wit dem beatz man they're hot check out my stuff wen u get da chance

shit is crazy, i could kill that. respect

you def gotta get into more dnb! def droppable...