Well your song fits perfectly with the loop and I like the voice at the beginning. Together with the sudden switch with the drum incoming makes it great. I feel though as if the song is too long. After a while nothing news gets added and that may be boring to some.
Keep up the great work
on Slow Guitar RnB Jazz by zacwilkins
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on Lofi piano chords by Mingu5
https://soundcloud.com/pjamito/virtual-thing
Keep up the great work
on Rhodes and Riff -CHILL- by RacTac
man you're a god
on Chillout Jazz Piano by BakoBone
just did it