I have listened to your track on soundcloud. May I tell you my some suggestion? If you use the loop I would try to avoid too many repetitions. Especially the use of the the high note G, which sounds in my opinion too loud and dominating.
Less of this and perhaps some short silence or mute of the melody or adding some rhythm part instead would make the track more interesting.
Hope you can accept my view.
Übrigens bin ich auch in der Gegend von Eutin geboren in Pönitz / Ostholstein, lebe aber schon lange in Baden-Württemberg.
Good Luck and regards from Jens Egert
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Less of this and perhaps some short silence or mute of the melody or adding some rhythm part instead would make the track more interesting.
Hope you can accept my view.
Übrigens bin ich auch in der Gegend von Eutin geboren in Pönitz / Ostholstein, lebe aber schon lange in Baden-Württemberg.
Good Luck and regards from Jens Egert
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