Much better already, nice fix :)
Until the first chorus... There the timing slipped a bit too early. But it was good the second time.
Sound- and mixing-wise there's still a lot going on and it's all in the center. Some panning maybe?
well, first try in this genre, here's what i've got so far, pretty raw, but i had a long night, i'll make it better^^ would you tell me what u think of it?
Well, I would first clear some room for the vocals and pay attention to the arrangement and mixing. Now all of the instruments and different sounds and vocals are competing with each other. So it becomes a mess of noise, when it's all going on at the same time. I would cut down some stuff, bringing the vocals more hearable. Then leave out the vocals for a while, to play around with the other stuff. Sometimes less is more. Is the bpm 175 that you work with? The vocals are not in time. Try to make the beat fit the vocals.
Hope this helps, good luck! :)
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whoops, sorry for doublepost^^
Until the first chorus... There the timing slipped a bit too early. But it was good the second time.
Sound- and mixing-wise there's still a lot going on and it's all in the center. Some panning maybe?
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Hope this helps, good luck! :)