zoielou
Always looking for collaborations
Birmingham, United Kingdom
Joined : 18th Feb 2014 - 11 years ago
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on Forgetting You by zoielou
https://soundcloud.com/dj-candymane/forget-about-you-dance-remix-ft-zoie-lou-anja
on Without You OLD SONG by zoielou
on Cheat Old Track by zoielou
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on Forgetting You by zoielou
https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/155979 if you'd like to hear what I mean.
on Forgetting You by zoielou
on Without You OLD SONG by zoielou
little bit more practis and you will do very well you have a nice voice. so keep up the good work. ps i will use your samples on my new song which i have yet to make if this is ok i am trying to produce a number one hit via youtube.wil keep you posted xx marc
on Forgetting You by zoielou
I Produced and Arranged a Italodisco (80s style Pop) Song with your Acappella:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pkFXqV1z7fE
on Forgetting You by zoielou
on Forgetting You by zoielou
hope you like this groove will send you the instrumental version so you can change things a bit I have work out the tempo for you track its 119.837 bpm.
enjoy and do give me a feed back on this one.
on Rewind 2009 Unfinished by zoielou
on Forgetting You by zoielou
One thing that need work is the tempo. It's about 117 bpm, however, you are going offbeat a bit at times. In addition to this, some of the notes are off key. After listening and analyzing the song, you seem to be singing mostly in the key of C major.
I mention these two issues with the recording so that hopefully they improve in future recordings. The unstable tempo can be a "turnoff" to a producer that might not want to work harder on a free acapella. Same goes for singing in key. I thing that recording with a metronome and maybe a loop of a chord progression can help with both of these issues.
The recording is still better than many. I'd just like less work in fixing a recording, so that I can work more on composing! I hope my feedback doesn't seem harsh or rude, just shedding knowledge for improvement! I'm currently working on a track and hope to finish it sometime soon!
on Forgetting You by zoielou
but I want to give you some advice.
because I really want to work with your voice...
so..
I like the very beginning of the acapella till 1:00..
but That's all of this acapella.
It repeats till the end.
I heard the others of yours,
and all of your song repeats in one pattern.
That's what the problem is.
too many repeating makes your song boring.
maybe you have to split the part of your song like this,..
[verse1 - chorus - verse2 - chorus - bridge - chorus or some highlights]..
this is not the motto of the every song,
but at least you should have 2or3 part for the song.
and
lastly I want to tell you this again.
you have really good voice.
on Forgetting You by zoielou
on Without You OLD SONG by zoielou
https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/153456
on Without You OLD SONG by zoielou
enjoy peaceout, i enjoyed making this anyway
on Forgetting You by zoielou
on Rewind 2009 Unfinished by zoielou
on Forgetting You by zoielou
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xzKPEGjTxs0
greets
Andi
on Forgetting You by zoielou
on Forgetting You by zoielou
on Rewind 2009 Unfinished by zoielou
I try a R n B groove hope you like.
boogieflippo
on Without You OLD SONG by zoielou
I have try a RnB groove hope you like.
boogieflippo
on Rewind 2009 Unfinished by zoielou
give me a mail. cheers.
stephen
on Without You OLD SONG by zoielou
on Rewind 2009 Unfinished by zoielou
You need to sustain you vocals chords to give a trance vibe here ,I can try a R&B groove with some mastering on your vocals that it will try.
here a sample off sustain vocals in which I have written with other singers and you will see what I am all about.
cheers.
Stephen
https://soundcloud.com/groovefactoryconobus