InverSound

cool.................

Your voice has some good tonality. When you sing, think of it coming from the bottom of your chest, as opposed to your throat or mouth. A piano has a big cavity even though the notes seem like theyre coming from the just keys. A voice comes from the center of your body, deep inside.

this is original? really harmonic

really smoooth nice one

This reminds me of Chemical Bros. From one of their early albums, cool

thanks brother, i need to work on my flow, u have good flow

good job good energy

lol i love your tracks and loops, especially the bizarre cthings you leave in the description box lulz

nice harmonies

good kick sound

cool, i like your wide panned kick druim

wow, really good

the main synth riff could use some portamento/glide, it's a bit rigid clunky sounding, a little delay too, like a 3/16th delay

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fcOXqFQw2hc

I liked it from the start in composition, your high end freqiencies like around 3khz range are a little hissy though, and the overall sound of the mix is a bit tinny imo. the synths sound crisp, synth leads are good. The bass is just lacking a fatness, and punch, and the overall ,mix is tinny, like thin sounding, but good composition

i like the arps innit, I think it kind of meanders along and doesnt havea real distinct climax though, or much contrast, and if it's DEEP house, I think the bass should be deeper, that's just me though, when I think of deep house, I htink of deep fat kick drum and a dark brooding bassline. Thius is more spacy electronic genre than it is deep house IMO. I'm a trance guy not a house guy so...take it for what its worth, the arps are really ambient and melodic though...nice

It's really heavy and I like it, If I was collatborating with yopu I would shorten it by about half, so 2:30-300 minute song with your bass solo much sooner. THe other thing I would do, is not have a chord change when your main riff stats at 1:00.at 3:00, it sounds weird like the new phrase just "starts" out of nowhewre maybe out of time. I really like the guitar solo! is that You man! Your guitar definitely rocks. The second solo with tapping is WAY out of time though.

looks like this song is getting really popular! nice one!

i like this, sounds very professional, except the kick drum maybe a bit fuzzy, maybe thats whaty your going for...

kind of dreamy sound pretty repetitive though

the main riff that is 3 notes ascending is repetitive, i like the beat its good, try and do some filter sweeping on the drums when you are transitioning to a new phrase

sounds alot better than before, only thing I would do is make sure you are using MONO for your bassline, that way the stereo image is focused on the center, your bassline is phasing inand out of the left and right sides, not pleasing to the ear, and the bassline should be 30-100 Hz, you can then layer some stereo bass tracks on top that are 100-130 Hz and have them phasing

at around 1:40 theres pops and clicking very displeasing to the ear, no one would listen to this aftrer hearing those pops with a good mind. nice sound though relaxing

the slow beat at the start is out of time with the synth, oir the synth is out of time with the beat either way, and when you majke it go fast, it sounds like a totally different song that you just lopped on to the first one. focus on transitioning your rythms better, and also, make sure something is in beat. I'm going to give you excellent advice but youll probably dismiss me and think im stupid but the best way to learn how to make good EDM is to DJ first, learn how songs are structured and what makes those songs sound good to you.

you should dial down the frequency on the phaser, it's way too hissy, you know the phaser? I'm assuming you used a phaser effect device on this, any way the bass drum sounds pretty good pretty deep