StrawHatDJ

You should definately continue to work on this or come back to it at a later date. I will be working on multiple projects at the same time because I never know when something that doesn't quite fit into what I'm working on now will fit really nicely into another project.

It sounds like your DJing and mixing in a completely different beat at the end like your bringing another banging tune.

Very good match your voice, lyrics and the track. Please do more!

Call it anything but weird. I'd agree that this is an artists piece of Art.

I love how it made me think that I was on a train and it pulled into some jazzy station with some street performers doing their thing. Then we all got back on the train to continue our journey...

I'm feeeeling this beat. I'm not feeling the lyrics but you guys know how to flow and thats banging.

It could have been better.

Take off all that reverb/echo on your vocals. Right at the end of the song you did it right with yourself singing the echo.

I swear you ripped this from Shamanic Greatest Hits Volume II = P

Beautiful drums and flute sounds. I wouldn't say you've captured the essence of the spirit, rather that you have traversed the same paths together.

Lovely chanting in the background too
= )

That made me feel like I was listening to a movie soundtrack. I really want to hear what it would sound like with the screams.

Also are you gona make a second part to it? Like what happens when the fallen angel gets help or the weird creatures find her?

Stories by music = )

Excellent flow and rythm. Music doesn't have to be understood in terms of language as long as it it understood by the feelings.