Why would I need YOU to do this for me when i'm using ableton and I could have just copied the same part 3 times or whatever stupid shit you did with this?
O_O well damn dude I was trying to give you an idea for what I think should be added for your song. You did ask for some suggestions so this is what I came up with. Be proud that someone did this for YOU and only for YOU because of the song THEY LIKED. THIS IS ONLY AN IDEA YOU CAN EDIT THIS GOD DAMN ****!
I think that this would make a great back track. You need a lead that does something more interesting introduced and this track would kick even more ass.
Nice tight intro snare. Perfect feel. Nice playing with the bass. And i liked the high vocalized lead combined with the well placed wobbled. Easily Your best track on here. Maybe try and changing the back Arp a little to make it more interesting. Thats the only thing I would say.
It's a bit muddy. The combination of to many low frequencies makes it sound uneven and amateur. The beginning is very unique and well done. The lead comes in to heavy and fast. And it shouldn't cut off so sudden when you do the build up. Try to maintain a melody in your wobble bass. Overall decent song. A bit odd sounding and out of place at times. But I'm in love with the lead. Check out my track and messege me back if youd maybe wana Collab.
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