This is what ive been listeing to you for. This is what i wanted from you.
I have listened to everything you have and i know you have the potential to really create such diverse peices and keep that raw rap feel to it.
This is what the southern style of Rap can create that most styles can't. That flip from different genres and still keep it gritty.
excellent job.
This was a brilliant idea, i just felt you could have done a little more. The drum line was too basic for the idea. Try messing around with your drums in different styles at different times of the beat. as log as you transition them right, it will sound good.
I can see why you Fav this one.
The bass line should switch up tho. Try switching the beat every 8 bars. You have extreme potential man.
I would love to work on a beat of yours for my intro to my new project. and maybe a little more after that.
Let me know if thats possible. I'm always trying to collab. haha but im an East Coast artist so i dont dig the all out southern. I gotta get more bounce to my head wrather than my body. haha
Thank you very much... Always open to opinions.. Thank you very much.....I do need to switch up the bass huh?? Let it breath a lil bit more.. I would love to possibly work w/ you... Im a rookie @ this. I like to say seasoned rookie...Respekt
Yo, this is hot. but i feel the low frequencies could have been harder. the Bass and Kick drums.
The hats kinda get too consistant. try slowing the hats down when the chorus and bridges come in.
But overall you got it down.
nice work.
amazing. we have to do something together.
you do need a better microphone tho its not handling your voice. your too good for your equipment. hahaha
keep it up
Thank you so much for the compliment and for taking time to listen to my track. I appreciate it... about the microphone thing, I think I already have an alternative before I get my own mic...Thanks again...
not bad man. i see you went a lil comercial with it. def something for the ladies to sing over.
i dont hear anything wrong with the mastering so good job.
nice, i wasnt really diggin the horns much just because they dont really sound real, u can tell they were made thru a synth. u gotta use different effects and EQ's to make them sound legit. if your interested i would like you to send me all the sounds in loops so we can collab on this beat.
I like the beat and i wana rap over it but, i wana add some other stuff to it. email me the loops if your down.
docpone@gmail.com
yo i aint tryna sound like the odd ball but "I need to rock this beat"
ive love this joint just as much as every1 else, but a pint more made me ask to rock it. lol
i hear her saying "searching for love" so im ready to go off that. email me ASAP and let me know if theres a future with mine and your skills. lol. if your down email me the beat right away dont wait. i already wrote a verse.
yo! i love this. im working on a new promo album and i'd love it if you let me throw some type of rap drums on this so i can flow like crazy and tear it up.
i love the drums you got on now its just that i would want more bounce to it for the verses.
let me know if i can rock this with an email. docpone@gmail.com
hell yeah!! i love this. real raw emotion here, i can feel it.
nice job. the only flaws were your way of recording and the work put into the mastering.
other than that your on a serious tip right here. great work here. keep it up
Thanx for this review. As far as recording and mastering im still figuring that stuff out. Im pretty stoked you got the "raw emotion" part; thats exactly what i was wanting people to get out of it. Thanks again.
Not bad. i heard your voice on the freestyle and frankly i dont think you need that autotune, give it a try. but i see the whole concept of this track and with out the autotune it wouldnt be much techish..lol
lovely. i like it. the rhymes are on point. the drive is good, i can feel you on this. your presence is really strong on this track. sweet stuff. idk about that autotune tho. i aint a fan of that joint personally. I say if you cant sing then don't, get somebody who can, Lol.
a great set of sounds put together. i love the way everything grooved together. its lovely. lol.
this has high potential on keeping people dancing all night long. keep it coming.
sweet. i like the snare idea. its all distortion and not a real snare. lol. the beat really brings some heat after a while too, kept me listening to see what else would happen.
big ups man.
i love this track. i too lost many close to me. i love rap like this, shit with true deep meanings behind them. the warrior fights for what is dearest to him. bravehearted and strong. this track is top notch.
Lato, good lookin out,
music today seems to have lost passion, i write songs about what is pertinent to my life, for i believe the words, emotions, and stories translate and trancend barriers\ in hope of reaching others............."that whole human factor"
on Top Secret by TraXnCtrl
That's really all i can say.
Trax
on Warm Up Anthem by ShawnAndrewsEDID
I have listened to everything you have and i know you have the potential to really create such diverse peices and keep that raw rap feel to it.
This is what the southern style of Rap can create that most styles can't. That flip from different genres and still keep it gritty.
excellent job.
on Keep Going by ShawnAndrewsEDID
nice choice of Synth to put in tho.
on Ohhhhh Yeah by ShawnAndrewsEDID
Keep it up.
on It's Obvious by ShawnAndrewsEDID
The bass line should switch up tho. Try switching the beat every 8 bars. You have extreme potential man.
I would love to work on a beat of yours for my intro to my new project. and maybe a little more after that.
Let me know if thats possible. I'm always trying to collab. haha but im an East Coast artist so i dont dig the all out southern. I gotta get more bounce to my head wrather than my body. haha
on "I Still Got It" by ShawnAndrewsEDID
This beat right here is nice. It sounds like something T.I. would have got on when he first came out, before the whole Pop takeover now.
I seen your from Cali too, I'm waiting on some of that classic West Coast stuff.
on Might Have a Clue by ShawnAndrewsEDID
The hats kinda get too consistant. try slowing the hats down when the chorus and bridges come in.
But overall you got it down.
nice work.
on Dis Harmonics Riddim by AceRuiz
Please tell me no one has wrote verses to this. I would love to wreck it.
email me. docpone@gmail.com
on The Trouble With Love (MInatory) by Marj
you do need a better microphone tho its not handling your voice. your too good for your equipment. hahaha
keep it up
God Bless ya!
Marj
on 10en Pounds (of BASS) by Tiltedbeats
make the CD's say, Produced by me and you. off rip sonny!!!
yooo, Spank me Butcher!!!
on Missunderstood Instrumental by DustHill
i dont hear anything wrong with the mastering so good job.
on I Get By by DuckCez
I like the beat and i wana rap over it but, i wana add some other stuff to it. email me the loops if your down.
docpone@gmail.com
on It's been a blast by ShowGunProductions
on test flute by dliwehtfollac
tight mix man. I love it. reminds me of indians.
on Still On This Ting by Lady_Vipa_Vicious
its official tho, ima work with you.
you gon have to rap with me soon.
on DUBPLEXX - Being with you by DUBPLEXX
I want you to work with me on this new promo of mines. your beats and my rhymes mixed with many guest appearances from good people.
think about it and hit me up PRONTO! with some beats to get this ball rolling.
DubPlexx & Pone Lato.... That's a force you should let be with you.
on DUBPLEXX-FRENCH ESPRESSO by DUBPLEXX
ive love this joint just as much as every1 else, but a pint more made me ask to rock it. lol
i hear her saying "searching for love" so im ready to go off that. email me ASAP and let me know if theres a future with mine and your skills. lol. if your down email me the beat right away dont wait. i already wrote a verse.
docpone@gmail.com
on The Shakedown by hellodj
i love the drums you got on now its just that i would want more bounce to it for the verses.
let me know if i can rock this with an email. docpone@gmail.com
on Your Special Piano by codymeiser
nice job. the only flaws were your way of recording and the work put into the mastering.
other than that your on a serious tip right here. great work here. keep it up
on Dance With Me ft Sky T by StephanieKay
on Neva Gona Stop by monstaflow
its ill tho, keep it up.
on life is beautiful by highz
this has high potential on keeping people dancing all night long. keep it coming.
on Computer_Rooter by Faketrix
big ups man.
on SwagMaster**Freestyle** by EthicSpeaks
well done, crazy flow
on She produced by Bluestocks by COStly
music today seems to have lost passion, i write songs about what is pertinent to my life, for i believe the words, emotions, and stories translate and trancend barriers\ in hope of reaching others............."that whole human factor"