Exfain

Kick needs more shaping, better sidechain, more bass overall, probably one more bass layer, an element to create more presence, overall i dont like the compression on this, sounds kinda flat,
musicwise add some more FX overall and probably a bit more variation in the arrangement itself, cant give an exact advice how it should be but i need more variation
ah at the end i had the slight feeling theres not much pannign going on, but im on a cheap pair of speakers rn, so that might not be true, but if so, pan and widen a bit

Hey, kannst dich ja mal bei mir melden, könnte mir durchaus denken hiermit was zu machen oder aber ne andere collab. Gruß

Incredible Chords and Synth. In my eyes (!) its a shame that you waste them on a dubstep beat or maybe thats good so you could let me make a remix.
Would love to hear if you let me make a remix:
tim.red@gmx.de

This is a good one for me!
Lots of interesting things going on here,
some vocals would give this track the extra touch it needs to become a banger.
I really enjoy this one!

Guess the collab request is only for vocalists but if you drop me the notes or a midi for the pluck I'd like to give it my twist.
Cheers