The static-y sound effect under the drums sounds great. The dissonant undertone almost sounds like another song is playing, but it works. The change at 1:17 is unexpected and appreciated. Awesome bird interlude. Great track.
There are a lot of cool sounds here, but it sounds a bit like you only used loops. There's not much transition and it can be a bit jarring. Pretty cool track.
Thank you :) the feedback is much appreciated! Yeah now that you say it , it is a lil loud. Ill deff keep that in mind next time and probably clean this one up. Thank you
I wouldn't get too hung up on genre if I were you. I hear several elements in it. Your percussion sounds great and the music underneath fits it well. I would suggest more variation to develop the track further. Also, I highly recommend listening to CharlesTheFirst - The Ascent. You can find it on youtube, spotify, and soundcloud. I'm sure you'll find inspiration there. Cool track.
Thank you so very much. I really do love constructive criticism. I know i need to work on my mastering skills. Its a skillset that Always needs improvement.I am glad you enjoyed this track.. there will always be more coming.
Some of the instruments sound out of key. The main piano melody is neat, but some variation or development would be nice as well. As for the genre, this is trap with a piano.
Individually the music and the vocals are cool, but it sounds like two separate tracks. It sounds out of time. The instrumental section in the middle is great. The subtle strings are awesome.
HHello HeathAlexander, I would like to thank you for your constructive criticism. You're right. The vocal line is not on point with the music. Unfortunately, the reason is that all the music was put under the vocal track afterwards. This is extremely difficult with some vocal tracks because both the singer and the composer, arranger and producer act at their own pace. Unfortunately, this difficulty is clearly heard on this track. However, I think that you can still see that both players are passionate about the matter. In a life situation there would be no timing fluctuations or "parallel worlds". Even if the singer would have sung to the composition afterwards, there would probably have been no timing problems.
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