Well i'll tell 'ya. That's one way to leave a "little" something about your track. :] Anyhoo. I loved the beginning, it was pretty damn cool. I can tell you worked quite hard on this clip just by listening to it. My personal opinion; get some strings in there. Then add some drums, and you got yer'self one fine soundin' track. :]
Being that I don't listen to rap/Rnb/soul or whatever you'd like to call it, I rather enjoyed this song. I think this little track would be one of those types of tracks that have no words in it. Well done.
Since this happens to be your first time, i'll go easy on you. The main sound wasn't terrible, though it wasn't amazing. Being your first time, I wasn't expecting it to be. Now then. Here are a few tips to get a better grade in my book.
1.) LESS REPETITION! - The one thing that annoys me the most in music is repetition. Hence why I don't like techno.
2.) Smoothness in transition. - The high resonating tone you had in there skipped a little bit. That's bad.
Otherwise, continue making songs. I'd like to see you get better as you learn more.
I'd love to hear you re-make this song. For a first time, it's pretty darn good. It's a bit repetitive, being the only part that I dislike. Get some synth kits, and re-make this song in your own way. You have the talent, now you just need to learn how to use it. :]
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1.) LESS REPETITION! - The one thing that annoys me the most in music is repetition. Hence why I don't like techno.
2.) Smoothness in transition. - The high resonating tone you had in there skipped a little bit. That's bad.
Otherwise, continue making songs. I'd like to see you get better as you learn more.
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on Maelstrom by DJ_Wreck