The instrumental is just awesome but I think you have to improve your screams. I mainly listen to Post-Hardcore and I only know the Screams and Growls from that genre. Alesana has some awesome screams in their songs. I think those would fit just perfect into your song ;)
It's all good. Tell me your language and I'll type into Google Translate and hope it doesn't let me down. HAHA! But I'm glad you liked the instrumental at least. As far as vocals go, my screams so suck but I'm trying not to have the same screams as a lot of other bands. I noticed a lot have the same as the others and while I was growing up and listening to this music, there were A LOT more different screaming styles. I wanted to try the same thing. But I'll still take that critique in and try better on the screams and growls. I'll give your stuff a listen too. Thanks again! :D
-Mike Zippy Vee
PS: Your English was perfect. Don't worry about it.
on Into The Sunset by MZV
Best regards ;)
btw, sorry for my bad english.
-Mike Zippy Vee
PS: Your English was perfect. Don't worry about it.