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Bravooo & hi young lady & it's unbelievable for first track & so young girl I'm looking in picture .
if I don't lie , it was a INVIDIOUS comment(lol).
crystalang,go on for it girl & seems u can be one of the next generation of music stars .

Hi & it sounds like the clouds when they want to cry but they can't. really nice & makes me to remember some thing,some one, or some where ,like how u feel when u have been missed yourself .
just as the other guys have been told u in here,I think a (whisper or light & bright )vocal line ( I've hear your vocals in some of your other trax & think your sound is set with your music & U're singing with all of your heart)& your vocal can complete your mood in this trax too , also I think ,maybe u can add some pad or duet string to it,& in some moments u can add a little more complicated piano notes,or even delay to some where in your piano lines,& I don't know if what is your idea about Reverb for your string line wich still sounds a little dry .
like u, I don't prefer beat for additional lines on such a melacholic mood & if I was instead of you , i was thinking about a glockenspiel line. even some nature sound like the wind or the waves of the sea or I prefer birds singing with your string line& also some thing like flute or harmonica some where between your piano,your strings,your hypothesis vocal line in such a minor scal . & some idiophonic instrument like rainstick might could change phase for some short moments & then backs u again on your main them mood.
any way,what is absolutly clear in your track , is some one who is making music with all of her soul . that was lovely for me & thank u for share your feeling & nice music & let me to hear it .
+my apologize for such a long idea to u about yoyr own track.

Hallo Ishimizu ,I've listened to several of your trax , und doch . . I Ithink it's one of your bests.or even the Best .oder?

I think 7 download in such a short time shows what a lovely track I heard , I usually don't love Reggae but this one was talking to me without vocal , a succefull trial that just I think Bariton Sax in Bb can make it still better & better .
thnx 4 make me enjoy a Reggae music .

Creative it was, I liked it man,thnX

thank u man,Creative & Good Metal Idea . .