This is a good start, probably would add another instrumental to the chorus, maybe a string, but it's still good the way it already is. Keep up the good work man.
Decent beat, but since it's so short you might want to think about shortening the intro. And think about changing the chorus up a little bit too so it sounds like it transitions better from the verses.
Hey, I liked the beat a lot. I'm definitely gonna write something for this, and like the person before me said, making a longer version would be a good idea.
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