i know that feeling of dont get any comments so will give you one :D your ideas are very great and in case that is your third track you are really good. your track sound kinda "standard". i mean you have to fill it up with your own brand if you know what i mean^^. keep it up and dont get frustrated if you dont get any feedback. its normal. btw which DAW do you use?
on PSY - Gangnam Style Tim Ismag Remix by CapRapHQ
on DJ GALLALA MY THIRD ONE by djgallala91
but i think that it is (+/-) intricate :)
on DJ GALLALA MY THIRD ONE by djgallala91
i will Take them into account
i use MAGIX MX AND YOU ?
on Skortix - Teardrops by SkortixDUBSTEP