The melody is really catchy and as a singer I could Imagine myself singing on it but I feel missing that extra kick. You're heading in the right direction, I feel you could use a drum loop under it just to make the track a lot more stronger and thicker. Also I kind of got lost from 00:58, it seems like two different songs until it intertwines at 00:17. I think if you structure it better like (intro,verse,chorus,verse,bridge,chorus) for example it will sound amazing. Overall I do really like it!! Just needs a few tweaks :D. Hope this helps.
hey thanks for the advice :), a drum loop could be cool ill mess around with the idea and see what happens :D, and yeah i really need to learn to structure my songs better im glad you enjoyed non the less lol THANKS ALOT :D
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