the instrumental is hot man! the vocal itself needs more timing adjustments according to the tempo of the track, great guitar recording. i would ad a little and i mean a litter reverb and delay to them with low feedback so it dosnt sound so looped. by the way those keys sound nice and lush and the mastering isnt bad either. but other than that its sounds good. i would love to make a remix of the instrumental, i would lay some sick drums to it. keep it up.
neat bpm change man,you definitely have some skills.
ill be looking forward to your future production. keep at it
btw do you have a soundcloud account?
your very good. it seems as tho your telling a story, i would like to do a hip hop sample beat out of this if you dont mind. ill feature you and post the link here as a collaboration
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ill be looking forward to your future production. keep at it
btw do you have a soundcloud account?
http://soundcloud.com/cufool
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