Hey thnx Johnofthebook took me awhile to post this is one of the things I have done glad u liked it. I'm new to all this but always wanted to do stuff like this just wished I had been encouraged when I was a kid. But I'm here now!! Thanks again for listening. JET!AKA Scool!
good track, however most musicians keep playing things over and over like this track. think music and lyrics. This sounds more like a video game than a track for music. where is the hook and why is the hook so long. the key to rock is to punch them all in the ball and leave them singing it. megadeth is a great example of riding that shit from point a to point b without skipping a crunch.
thanks for your feedback,
you got a point,
problem is i'd love someone to sing on top of that. as i'm not a singer myself, it is hard to imagine how to structure the song.
if anyone would sing on top of this, i'd appreciate the input of how many bars i should keep the different riffs.
i marked this as a collab request for a reason, it is uncomplete otherwise.
thanks and take care.
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you got a point,
problem is i'd love someone to sing on top of that. as i'm not a singer myself, it is hard to imagine how to structure the song.
if anyone would sing on top of this, i'd appreciate the input of how many bars i should keep the different riffs.
i marked this as a collab request for a reason, it is uncomplete otherwise.
thanks and take care.
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