I dont want to sound like a critic but im gonna make some suggestions. That is a demo that has a potential to be a masterpiece. between segments what i suggest you do is make the melody of the verse stop while you still have the drums and then the chorus should come crushing in just like you have done in your demo. That is amazing, and i hope the final product turns out well, cheers :)
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