very cool instrumentalism under the vocal...one of the best thing I guess, to make music to vocal...this is amazing...speciall like the baas guitar and it's dissonant tunes...great...
Thanks buddy. I did a couple of small changes on the song but most people probably wouldn't notice them. Other than that, I tried to get it as close as possible to the original. Definitely one of my fave new wave bands of the era and they were always fun.
yeah, it's good but it's way far from chill out...on my humble opinion, it's a tensioned 1.20 with too many dark mood so when I want to chill it's not a music I would choose...kinda tripy, trapy stg is it...:-)
but it's cool and it has a chance to be a whole track not just a snippet...:-)
I'm not too good in advices cause music is absolutely subjective...
but in this case, I'm tryin...:-)
if I were you I would surely changed that 'type-writer' kinda hi-hat sound...it's a bit irritative for more than 2 mins...also that pad...it's a cool idea but not for that long...try to get another part, and more instruments...I know that lo-fi isn't a progressive genre but more is needed...:-)
look after in this site, the leader track in the lo-fi can give you tips...that's an outstanding song from elijahbcrouch...
what a song...electronic???? jazzy/funky/weirdness with outstanding groovies and huge harmonies...absolutely headbanging without distorted guitars and crash drums :-)
this is a cool intro for a lo-fi chill out song...donno, you could move into many ways, genres...with some kinda weird guitars it could be a lo-fi song...with some pads and melodies it become a chill out one...but all in all, you should find another part for the song...
I didn't find any bass samples that I found fitting and I hadn't figured out how to add a bass through the programme. In my newer song i added a bass through the program. Heres the link btw: https://soundcloud.com/j0ghurtlofi/memories
to tell you the truth it's absolute cool for the first...too short but lo-fi isn't a genre of the overthinked opuses...:-)
though, the bass is missing...
thanks for the feedback! I already have my second song up on soundcloud and I will upload it here as soon as I can. The missing bass is because i didn't know how to add it lol
instant fav from 0.42...I feel Ed's influence in the whole song...and yes, what the hell is happening with Mr. Tumbleweed in this days, do you have some information Leon?
but back to here...fantastic harmonies, guitar, pinao and drum play but I make a mistake if I think there is no bass in the song, or if it is, for my taste is a bit few...
Thanks alot my friend... I truly appreciate your positive feedback ! Well, unfortunately Ed wasn't involved in this one and also I would hardly talk about influences, but I'm sure the song would have been much better if he was involved. Can't tell you much about his situation, but he's going through some unexpected commitments in his recent life, so the music is a bit sidelined at the moment but I think he's on a gradual comeback...In fact we even have a new collab which will be uploaded here on Loopey in the near future..:) And now about the bass...there are indeed some sections without it and in some is more underneath. Perhaps you can hear it a bit more in following sections : 3:43- 4:38 / 6:29-7:09 / 7:24-8:35 /.....
fantastic jazzy/chill...yeah, for your first time it's very promising...from my view, the mix is a bit weak in volume but it's an easy problem to solve it...:-)
Thank you, Danke.
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I will consider your feedback for future tracks and hope that you'll like them too!
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handshake, Danke
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great fx adds and cool vocal sounds...
congrats and handshake, Danke
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handshake, Danke
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thanx for the groovy feeling!!!
handshake, Danke
Thanks buddy. I did a couple of small changes on the song but most people probably wouldn't notice them. Other than that, I tried to get it as close as possible to the original. Definitely one of my fave new wave bands of the era and they were always fun.
Mark.
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Greetings from Dallon
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but it's cool and it has a chance to be a whole track not just a snippet...:-)
handshake, Danke
on Untitled by BONEZONMARZ
would be an interesting duel...
congrats and handshake, Danke
on cant wait to leave by Klinokee
Danke
on cant wait to leave by Klinokee
I'm not too good in advices cause music is absolutely subjective...
but in this case, I'm tryin...:-)
if I were you I would surely changed that 'type-writer' kinda hi-hat sound...it's a bit irritative for more than 2 mins...also that pad...it's a cool idea but not for that long...try to get another part, and more instruments...I know that lo-fi isn't a progressive genre but more is needed...:-)
look after in this site, the leader track in the lo-fi can give you tips...that's an outstanding song from elijahbcrouch...
handshake, Danke
on Hack Attack by Indieground
what a song...electronic???? jazzy/funky/weirdness with outstanding groovies and huge harmonies...absolutely headbanging without distorted guitars and crash drums :-)
fantastic piece of music Indie...
handshake, Danke
on testing by w1p3r
handshake, Danke
on memories by j0ghurt
10/10
handshake, Danke
on lonely by j0ghurt
you work with loops or created these song by vst's?
or you had some technical difficulties?
Danke
on lonely by j0ghurt
though, the bass is missing...
congrats and handshake, Danke
on Wildlands by Orlando51
but back to here...fantastic harmonies, guitar, pinao and drum play but I make a mistake if I think there is no bass in the song, or if it is, for my taste is a bit few...
but it's only a sideline comment...
great song, handshake, Danke
With much appreciation & handshake____Leon
on First by kategawa
(if you want, of course...:-)
handshake, Danke
on orbit - rainy day by pepenojeans
all in all, great track...
handshake, Danke
on Its Over prod southpaw by BONEZONMARZ
than...
I've never heard a hip hop song without speech or spit...:-)
your voice is very limited I think, watching the genres...chill out, lo-fi, ambient and maybe reggae, reggaeton...on my humble opinion...
but I'm still the fan of your vocs of course...
handshake, Danke
on Eliptica by FRITZOMATIC
handshake, Danke
Much love and respect,FRITZOMATIC
on Dead Friend - Little Music Box by Trillify
nothing to change maybe some kinda "wardrum", you know the big toms from 1.55 to lift the final epicness...but it's only me of course...
you are one of the best in cinematics, that's for sure...
greetings, Danke
I really appreciate your comments and I'm glad you like my tracks!
I will consider your feedback for future tracks and hope that you'll like them too!
Thanks for listening to my music.
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10/10
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