Ahhh...very cool, moody, jazzy, fantastic flow...generally I don't listen hip hop but this is an outstanding work on my humble opinion...(someone who doesn't know the style...) :-)
This is fantastic...short but essential...kinda jazzy/tripy/chilly mood...snippet but it could be some kinda trailer music for example, coffee advertisement...:-)
Thank you! I'm definitely not a singer, I just like to write songs! I try though but without practicing and just making up words as I go isn't the most effective way of doing things. But its fun!
that guitar is awesome...though I'm not sure about the bass synth...seems like it's out of tune sometimes (perhaps, it's only me, I'm hearin that...)...but the whole one is more thah promising...
great...yeah, SOAD feeling of course...very dirty, low ended mix, which is ultra cool...in the middle (doom) section the snare is a bit loud, lives it's own way, if you know, what I mean...but of course, I know, it's a rough, first try...get the whole song...
Absolute sci-fi, utopistic, after the end of the world war 3 (but many say the covid-19 is the World War 3...) song...bit scary, thought-provoking song, what will be with humanity type...
Hi Friend, I really appreciate your comment because the song really wanted to be disturbing, as it was inspired by a homonymous story by HP Lovecraft. This is one of my songs that will be played as a background in the pauses between one video and another during the Lovecraft Film Festival 2020 in Portland (Covid permitting). Best wishes
Brilliant soft-rock...great, dirty composition (I mean the mix)...vocs are fantastic, I always like special languages in music like Spanish, French, Italiano :-)...
This could be an awesome song, if you pull down the volume meters on the mix...it's horribly overdriven...the music is absolute cool, in the mood of the great grunge era...vocs are cool too but could be much better, more listenable if not that loud...all in all, it's not attack, hope you get this...
very good, sensational guitar work...on my view, some kinda bass synth could solve the problem (like The Doors) cause it's all about guitars...dlded and I'll try to get stg with my bass guitar though...:-)
later, Danke
Thanks Danke, yeah it's a good way to finish the album...
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ABSOLUTE BRILLIANCE AGAIN...Those guitars rules...and the song too...unfortunatelly, you have to leave...in the wrong moment...your talent began to rise here :-)
come back as soon as possible
(earn money in the middle of the virus? tell me your secret...:-)
Ahhh...my younghood...brutal good sound and song...reminds me Rage against the machine from 0.28, Amorphis all of the choruses in the song...excellent, ultra cool rock in live...clap, clap, standing ovation...
Hello Danke,
Thank you very much for the feedback mate.
Glad you like it.
I hope you've downloaded the vast it is great Danke.
Thanks for the fave too.
Jamid
What a good song is this...moody, uplifting, positive, happy...musicality is 100% and I hear some kinda dubstep style from 1.00 and later at around 2.12...tempo change is a good idea for the finish...
very cool basic melodies and groovy but you should widen it a bit...another parts, breaks, more instruments...just because lo-fi, it doesn't have to be one-sided...
Thank you very much for your feedback!
I also wanted to make sure that the vocals are not filling the whole track, because of this I also added the piano in the second half of the track :)
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feetshake, Danke
on Make a Track by ItsNuu
congrats and feetshake, Danke
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on Mix 5 by Troubledsum
good song though...
feetshake, Danke
on Sad Boy by sasha1123
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on Lm29 - Dont Kick Me When Im Down by Lm29
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on Woak n wall by labru
cool song
feetshake, Danke
on For You Girl by kilogramx
I'm not an expert of this genre, but this is so chill...great synth sounds, interesting mood...
that vocal fx is 50-50% :-) but I believe in you...:-)
feetshake, Danke
on The Nameless City by Stereonomicon
Absolute sci-fi, utopistic, after the end of the world war 3 (but many say the covid-19 is the World War 3...) song...bit scary, thought-provoking song, what will be with humanity type...
10/10
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on Living in Quarantine by Troubledsum
This could be an awesome song, if you pull down the volume meters on the mix...it's horribly overdriven...the music is absolute cool, in the mood of the great grunge era...vocs are cool too but could be much better, more listenable if not that loud...all in all, it's not attack, hope you get this...
feetshake, Danke
on Star and sky by Aleatz
later, Danke
Enjoy.
on Finished Content by W1TN3SS
feetshake, Danke
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Feetshake, Danke
on Self Isolation rapcore by Cyrus0547
come back as soon as possible
(earn money in the middle of the virus? tell me your secret...:-)
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on Lm29 - Never Let Me Go demo 2 by Lm29
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on DARK SCAPEISM by DijamMusic
congrats and feetshake JAM!!!
Thank you very much for the feedback mate.
Glad you like it.
I hope you've downloaded the vast it is great Danke.
Thanks for the fave too.
Jamid
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feetshake, Danke
Yeah, that's a great idea. I'll test it out if it'll sound good at the finish.
Thanks man!
headshake
on Rap metal track by Cyrus0547
Those guitars are killer like a tone of bricks, drums are progressive heavens...hope you find someone on it to sing or speech or spit...
11/10 :-)
Feetshake, Danke
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on Meteors by W1TN3SS
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on waiting for better times by Majulah
cool track, Danke
I also wanted to make sure that the vocals are not filling the whole track, because of this I also added the piano in the second half of the track :)
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send you my email personally...
Danke