This is very cool...with the typicality of the genre...huge instrumentalism and great caw...but there is no bass (I know, there is but where?) and it gives only high frequencies...(and I also know, that this is the feature of the style, but...)
Thanks for the response, Danke. That's actually good feedback. It sounded pretty okay over the studio monitors, but I'll look into the frequencies again.
Brilliant production...that musical base is perfect for this 2 guys...vocs and that speech are both fantastic...you did a humble work to lift and push in front of them, but it would have been nice to hear an instrumental solo to calm down a lot of vocs if you know what I mean ...but that's just me...
great track indeed...moody, atnospherical type of music...this song remixed by many people so maybe I should listen to the original too ... maybe it's good ??? :-)
wow...what a musical base for this spit...kinda trip hop stg...cool speech...always liked your snippets, you're the only rap/hip-hoper, I get my hat off in front of your art...
the formula is that we can't upload "groovy" loops, when 2 or 3 instruments are working together...here is an example...my opinion is that the system sucks...this is an outstanding loop...
great snippet with the mix that you should clear a bit...everything are in a large array...everything sounds together ... the guitar playing turns gray on the drum, which is in a huge stereo ... effects blur everything...on my humble opinion... but that play and technicality is outstanding...
This is absolutely cool for the first...on my humble poinion though, you should widen the track with another parts, melodies, instruments...just because it's a lo-fi track, you don't have to constraints on...but that's only me of course...
wow...special bouquet...french...I'm blown away by the bass synth...very chill, jazzy, tripy...but let the last note waving more, before cut it at the end...
Ahhh...very cool, moody, jazzy, fantastic flow...generally I don't listen hip hop but this is an outstanding work on my humble opinion...(someone who doesn't know the style...) :-)
This is fantastic...short but essential...kinda jazzy/tripy/chilly mood...snippet but it could be some kinda trailer music for example, coffee advertisement...:-)
Thank you! I'm definitely not a singer, I just like to write songs! I try though but without practicing and just making up words as I go isn't the most effective way of doing things. But its fun!
hell knows, I like it...bit harsh, but it has to be, I think...music is awesome, your speech is surprisingly cool...never thought that you could spit...:-)
that guitar is awesome...though I'm not sure about the bass synth...seems like it's out of tune sometimes (perhaps, it's only me, I'm hearin that...)...but the whole one is more thah promising...
great...yeah, SOAD feeling of course...very dirty, low ended mix, which is ultra cool...in the middle (doom) section the snare is a bit loud, lives it's own way, if you know, what I mean...but of course, I know, it's a rough, first try...get the whole song...
Absolute sci-fi, utopistic, after the end of the world war 3 (but many say the covid-19 is the World War 3...) song...bit scary, thought-provoking song, what will be with humanity type...
Hi Friend, I really appreciate your comment because the song really wanted to be disturbing, as it was inspired by a homonymous story by HP Lovecraft. This is one of my songs that will be played as a background in the pauses between one video and another during the Lovecraft Film Festival 2020 in Portland (Covid permitting). Best wishes
Brilliant soft-rock...great, dirty composition (I mean the mix)...vocs are fantastic, I always like special languages in music like Spanish, French, Italiano :-)...
This could be an awesome song, if you pull down the volume meters on the mix...it's horribly overdriven...the music is absolute cool, in the mood of the great grunge era...vocs are cool too but could be much better, more listenable if not that loud...all in all, it's not attack, hope you get this...
very good, sensational guitar work...on my view, some kinda bass synth could solve the problem (like The Doors) cause it's all about guitars...dlded and I'll try to get stg with my bass guitar though...:-)
later, Danke
Thanks Danke, yeah it's a good way to finish the album...
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I like so much your comments
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though the end is abrupted a bit...
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good song though...
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I'm not an expert of this genre, but this is so chill...great synth sounds, interesting mood...
that vocal fx is 50-50% :-) but I believe in you...:-)
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Absolute sci-fi, utopistic, after the end of the world war 3 (but many say the covid-19 is the World War 3...) song...bit scary, thought-provoking song, what will be with humanity type...
10/10
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This could be an awesome song, if you pull down the volume meters on the mix...it's horribly overdriven...the music is absolute cool, in the mood of the great grunge era...vocs are cool too but could be much better, more listenable if not that loud...all in all, it's not attack, hope you get this...
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