First of all, that basic riff is fantastic and the intro, too...my personal opinion is that you have to play more with the drum (slow it down...), for the chorus you must make another chords to step out from that monotony...
The tone is pretty good so this is not much mixing work, I think...
I'm very happy to know your artwork in this song...this is fabulous, professional and moody...your guitar usage is hyper pro...those feelings what you put in your play is naturally borned and could never learn...huge respect that you play like this...your music is classical already in it's life:-)
Very special track...and very good...I'm the maniac of the groovies so I like your number...I feel too much industrial influence, too (+ points...)
Overall, super, intelligent song with 'deep' words and effects...
Congrats, Danke
my friend thank U very much for attention & an exclusive appreciation for U've thaughT it's better to write in private for me to respect me more .
nuT it was not needed man , never mind what it seems Danke...U've written:
''0.05, 0.11, 0.16, 0.22, 0.27, 0.33, 0.39, 0.44 Hope, that not my headphone is shit...:-) Danke ''
my wonderfull friend ! maximum probility detection of a process that is runing with a software denials your calculation !
I don't know maybe I have wrong translation from ''Pop'' in your sentence or I've change to a quite deaf musician , buT there's nothing wrong with those moments as I listen!
do U mean they are overgained ?
or as I undereestand U mean seems track jumps for U ?
if U mean track jumps & doesn't observe true beat , I'm sure something is wrong with your headphone.
look , Danke , I will send U in next 10 minutes my Guitar separated line & U can put it in your software ...
seriouslY U made me deel doubT ..! haha...
any way thnx alot for carefull attention my friend.
beyond everything , it's so great to see U listen so carefull & always try to be usefull in your worthy comments .thnak U very very much ,althoughT I'm sure U'll be convinced that U have a wonderfull mistake that I don't expect from an obvious master like U !
just please if I was wrong comeback & write & let me remember this new lesson I learned in looperman ...& if U were wrong never mind buddy , I'll delet this track completelY & tomorrow will upload it again .
for me Danke means one of most lovely & respectfull unseen friends who I have learned many things from him & I don't like this dialogue below this track .
take care .___Behnam
haha are U agree with comedy as genre ?really it's a drama that sounds a reverse Comedy..
Danke after all loopermanic appreciations & synonyms my friend..but I wonder to see U've counted ''too many pops'' which too many ? as U can see in description I've explained there are 2 pops(as U call it like that)in it not many . would be glad if tell me what pop U have found buT that one which happens @1:56 & if we want to be sooo stringent another one earlier too . would U please deffend your comment & describe for me how U've counted more than these 2 issues that I've written in my description too ?
it's really interesting for me to know how U have calculate them more than 2 & have changed them to many ?!
would be instructive in facT ...
Fantastic quality again...tihs is sci-fi, independent harmony heaven from you...:-)
Great track from start to finish...feet moving, head banging and enjoying the joyride with you man...super track
It's been a while we didn't meet but this time I had to :-)
I dont have much time on my hands at the moments,so i just had to make something in the few days i had on pc,so i created this track just to ease my mind lol.
You told me my versatility...man, you are so unpredictable musician...:-)
This is crying for a pro speak by someone...hip hop in it's best...if I would live in Brooklyn, I would jump into this collab, though you didn't recommended it...
I did in fact this beat for a local rapper of my area.I just wish i could stick to one genre when making music but i just cant,that goes against my nature.
Thanks for the thumbs up.
Thank you for your kind review.My best works(so i think)comes when i am in a dark place.The piano melodies i wanted them to sound like they were "talking"to each other a bit like call and response.
Well,thanks for taking the time my friend.
I can't criticize and I'm not able to criticize or give advice cause I'm not good in this dubstep or stg like that...but this is pure talent right here, I hear fabulous music and for me it's enough...standing ovation...
Honestly, I don't really understand this song...you said, you want to sing but there is not enough free place for the singer...it's a riff collection (not bad) without built for a vocal focused number...this is my true opinion, no offense just answer to your question...
i am really very thankfull . it was very very good that asked your idea and underestand problem . i will pick up this track from here now . you have a fan from today Danke .
This song is so pure, heartfelt and clear in the good meaning of the word...I love your voice when you sing in the mid level but the low one from 1.57 is not your style, I think...
woww Dane you're freeeeeking profi musician . yes ,that is not my style maybe.please aways tell your idea about my musics to me . i am very thankfull you listened this for my rquest.god bless you .
The love of our nature, homeland, family, etc...if somebody doesn't feel these feelings after this fabulous artwork, I stop for a 1 mninute silence for him or her...outstanding work
Yes, yes Danke! You are one of those people who help me sustain the level of enthusiasm for my amateurish musical adventures. Your positive feedback on my work help to keep me encouraged to further struggle with this strange conglomerate of notes,chords, rhytms and stuff...
So, big thanks once again and cya around___Orlando
This is super chillin too...that guitarish tone is awesome and all of the synth vsts produce a high tech sound...groovy but calm...fabulous harmonies...
Hohoho...hehehe...the good old Xpekt harmonies and groovies...man, I can't tell you how much I like your super pro music...full hearted, sincere, pure...no more words, just download and listen many times...huge respect and thanx...
on FastDeath01Ver02Track01 by 08PeeSon80
First of all, that basic riff is fantastic and the intro, too...my personal opinion is that you have to play more with the drum (slow it down...), for the chorus you must make another chords to step out from that monotony...
The tone is pretty good so this is not much mixing work, I think...
Have a good work, this is a hpeful track
Regards and best, Danke
on Star Rider by zappo
I'm very happy to know your artwork in this song...this is fabulous, professional and moody...your guitar usage is hyper pro...those feelings what you put in your play is naturally borned and could never learn...huge respect that you play like this...your music is classical already in it's life:-)
Thanx for the upload, Danke
Sorry for the late reply
Thanks for listening
on Now You Must Pay With Your Life by the1observant
Overall, super, intelligent song with 'deep' words and effects...
Congrats, Danke
on I hate Islamic governmenT by deciBel
Danke
nuT it was not needed man , never mind what it seems Danke...U've written:
''0.05, 0.11, 0.16, 0.22, 0.27, 0.33, 0.39, 0.44 Hope, that not my headphone is shit...:-) Danke ''
my wonderfull friend ! maximum probility detection of a process that is runing with a software denials your calculation !
I don't know maybe I have wrong translation from ''Pop'' in your sentence or I've change to a quite deaf musician , buT there's nothing wrong with those moments as I listen!
do U mean they are overgained ?
or as I undereestand U mean seems track jumps for U ?
if U mean track jumps & doesn't observe true beat , I'm sure something is wrong with your headphone.
look , Danke , I will send U in next 10 minutes my Guitar separated line & U can put it in your software ...
seriouslY U made me deel doubT ..! haha...
any way thnx alot for carefull attention my friend.
beyond everything , it's so great to see U listen so carefull & always try to be usefull in your worthy comments .thnak U very very much ,althoughT I'm sure U'll be convinced that U have a wonderfull mistake that I don't expect from an obvious master like U !
just please if I was wrong comeback & write & let me remember this new lesson I learned in looperman ...& if U were wrong never mind buddy , I'll delet this track completelY & tomorrow will upload it again .
for me Danke means one of most lovely & respectfull unseen friends who I have learned many things from him & I don't like this dialogue below this track .
take care .___Behnam
on I hate Islamic governmenT by deciBel
Special Behnam like bombing, attack, hard body assault...
Incredible genre journey with that heavy brain and soul of the artist called Anarchisticandi...:-)
Standing ovation my kind friend...
(Be careful, there are too many pops in the first, heavy section...)
Regards, Danke
Danke after all loopermanic appreciations & synonyms my friend..but I wonder to see U've counted ''too many pops'' which too many ? as U can see in description I've explained there are 2 pops(as U call it like that)in it not many . would be glad if tell me what pop U have found buT that one which happens @1:56 & if we want to be sooo stringent another one earlier too . would U please deffend your comment & describe for me how U've counted more than these 2 issues that I've written in my description too ?
it's really interesting for me to know how U have calculate them more than 2 & have changed them to many ?!
would be instructive in facT ...
on Needle and the Damage Done Cover by Darkreine
Danke
on Nothing Left Of Me ft Tara Toxic by brillbilly
Fantastic quality again...tihs is sci-fi, independent harmony heaven from you...:-)
Great track from start to finish...feet moving, head banging and enjoying the joyride with you man...super track
It's been a while we didn't meet but this time I had to :-)
Congrats and greet you, Danke
Thank you very much for taking time to comment!
I dont have much time on my hands at the moments,so i just had to make something in the few days i had on pc,so i created this track just to ease my mind lol.
Big thanks for all your kind comments!
Life love n unity man!
***chris***
on Waterhole scene by Jacksonsalazar
Super moody one, Danke
on Fake People by Bindanox
You told me my versatility...man, you are so unpredictable musician...:-)
This is crying for a pro speak by someone...hip hop in it's best...if I would live in Brooklyn, I would jump into this collab, though you didn't recommended it...
Best, Danke
I did in fact this beat for a local rapper of my area.I just wish i could stick to one genre when making music but i just cant,that goes against my nature.
Thanks for the thumbs up.
Regards
Nelson
on Trap Kid - XXX by MadLabz
Respect, Danke
on Yus-- by Tinka0
Waiting for the final result, greetings, Danke
on Back To Owls Nest by gomagn
Super harmonies and very 'tasty' drum prog...
Tripy thanx, Danke
on Six-- by Tinka0
This so pure and clear...reminds me a bit of C.O.C.'s metal works...dirty riffin and tones of weight in it...
Super (but what's that electro drumming at the end?...:-)
Danke
on 55 MILLION lost innocence by Smpulse
Super synth harmonies, great drumming...
Grats, Danke
Cheers
WIll
on This Life by Bindanox
What a super piano melody...got me...nice chillin with a bit hip hopish drum tone...we can easily say this is sad but this is not...hopeful...
Always love and will love your melodies, hope everything is fine or just on the whole...:-)
Friendly best wishes, Danke
Thank you for your kind review.My best works(so i think)comes when i am in a dark place.The piano melodies i wanted them to sound like they were "talking"to each other a bit like call and response.
Well,thanks for taking the time my friend.
All the best to you as well.
Nelson
on Eclipse by inklewinkle2
Danke
on sit down saucebox by Tonality
My best wishes, Danke
on All are passengers by Tonality
This song is so pure, heartfelt and clear in the good meaning of the word...I love your voice when you sing in the mid level but the low one from 1.57 is not your style, I think...
Though it's a super song...
Congrats, Danke
on Is My Land by lorkaxx
Thank you, Danke
on Talk To Me aka Duet Triste by Orlando51
Man, it's one of the biggest artwork right here...we have to get our hats off, cause this is pure talent...
Outstanding, independent work...
Regards, Danke
So, big thanks once again and cya around___Orlando
on Fish Out Of Water by DJRoy1
Like the added piano, too...
Great, Danke
Your kind words mean alot, as I think you're one on the most talented musicians here on Looperman.
Thanks again & keep uploading those awesome loops of yours,
Roy
on My way by dyldonomus
Best, Danke
on Floating in Time - Larry Wiggles aka Mark Jeffries by larrywiggles1
This is super chillin too...that guitarish tone is awesome and all of the synth vsts produce a high tech sound...groovy but calm...fabulous harmonies...
Respect, Danke
on Go Wonder by xpekt
Your friend and fan, Danke
Thanks for listening and of course I am really happy you enjoyed this one ;)
Cya soon!
XpekT.
on Sacred Heart - feat Writenow921 by paintedproduction
Fabulous...that music what you did under this language...:-)
Hat's off, Danke