Zenia

this is AWESOME! youre voice is really perfect for this, I would make there be a bit more reverb at the end of each "hide and seek" and a little echo. but otherwise you've got the makings. id love to collab with your voice sometime, i think our voices would be pretty together. :)

It's neat!! :) I definitely would make it longer.... so one can reaaaally feel the experience of this asian warrior.
Lovely. :D

you can sing man. this is great. i like this one a lot. i like that you dont curse, that's sooo admirable. youre great. your voice is great... maybe do some more sing and rap mixture? the "i can hear your soul sing" part, is really good.I like it a lot.

Your voice is great, I think that your mic is a bit off? a bit... scratchy? eh,
I love the instrumental and the "yea" after the yellow green red that the girl says, it's sweet.
Your rapping is great, I agree with the others that the beat got lost a little, but you kept it going and it turned out pretty sweet.
2face did a good job rapping too!I think that 2face has the 50 cent thing, with the overlapping voice. it's good. do more with effects I think... like, lil more overlapping, it'd be good. and a mic... that maybe captures your vocal depth? cus ive heard your other stuff and the vocals are more deep, whcih is reaaally great. :D
Keep it coming. ....looperman insisted I be constructive, so here we are. :)

The instrumental is amazing!!!! Seriously, amazing. And you are great at rapping, and I can hear that touch of 50 cent skills. Definitely you have the skill and the voice, but I think you should edit your voice a bit so it doesn't sound like you're in a bathtub, because the instrumental is so deep. I'm sure this could be done really easily!! I'd love to collab sometime, this could use a nice vocal chorus of some singing, seriously... your instrumentals are fab. You're awesome. haha. :D Keep them coming!!!!