Thanks for the review, I layed the bones of it down in a couple of hours then wrote the lyrics in about 20mins (as u can probably tell!) then messed around with it on and off for a few days before my bud added guitar and mixed it
I'm feeling the flow. The rhythm of the song is very catchy. I would suggest adding a lower octave of the organ to give it a fuller sound. Great effort though!
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on Not This Time by RebelThoughts