Wholy crap, Pieru. I really, really enjoyed this. I actually ended up sitting playing football manager and listening to this, nodding my head, as if it was played on the radio.
As Danke said, not much to point fingers at. I sincerely hope you keep this 6/8 thing going. I love it.
And tell Dubzg that his voice was made for this.
This is actually pretty catchy. The drums compliment the synth pretty well. Would love to have a deeper lower tone in it also, and perhaps add some open hats to the chorus part.
Hey man. Just heard your piece. Great work.
Personally i think it's a bit messy, with too many layers on it. Clean it up a bit, find a smooth line between your transitions and get some consistency - that would work wonders!
Think of it like a story you want to tell. You can't interrupt all the time - you need to give people a bit of comfort in knowing the progression.
You got a ton of good stuff in this mix - you just need to find a thin red line.
Despite that, i like your universe. As M2G said above, it's nature and peace. Exploit that! :-)
Thank you! :)
However, i think this is one of my most clear-out tracks ever... My style and ability simply won't fit for sophisticated tracks.
Chaotic, noisy and dissonant sounding and flappy transitions (especially the later) are lot more proper features for my universe. Actually, i find this one blissfully (pure luck, really :D) beautiful, but somehow boring to me too. :)
I digg it.
Really neat vocals there, and the guitar is amazing. Love the ambience it makes in this track. And it all sounds very immersive.. Good job guys!
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on potato land feat dubzg 1984 by pieru
As Danke said, not much to point fingers at. I sincerely hope you keep this 6/8 thing going. I love it.
And tell Dubzg that his voice was made for this.
Cheers!
Pieru
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on In the forest of the past by traz75
Personally i think it's a bit messy, with too many layers on it. Clean it up a bit, find a smooth line between your transitions and get some consistency - that would work wonders!
Think of it like a story you want to tell. You can't interrupt all the time - you need to give people a bit of comfort in knowing the progression.
You got a ton of good stuff in this mix - you just need to find a thin red line.
Despite that, i like your universe. As M2G said above, it's nature and peace. Exploit that! :-)
Take care man!
Thank you! :)
However, i think this is one of my most clear-out tracks ever... My style and ability simply won't fit for sophisticated tracks.
Chaotic, noisy and dissonant sounding and flappy transitions (especially the later) are lot more proper features for my universe. Actually, i find this one blissfully (pure luck, really :D) beautiful, but somehow boring to me too. :)
Regards, traz
on Tomorrow by TheBedlamKids
Really neat vocals there, and the guitar is amazing. Love the ambience it makes in this track. And it all sounds very immersive.. Good job guys!
on Mister XM - Drugs D-Funk Remix by dfunk54321
I'm really impressed by the beat and the way you split this track up!
Nice going!