DannyStyles

I agree with Mahloo13 - The production does need work. The track itself is actually very good. You have great lyrics and flow and the structure of the song is also good. Sonically, however, it needs a good mixdown. There's a couple of "mix issues" - the kick is there but it's rather low and sounds... "woolly" if you know what I mean? I also think that your vocal lacks mid and lower mid presence. To my ears the EQ of your vocal is a little bit too "telephone" - and lastly there is a sound in there that was panned hard left (sounded like a camera flash charging itself up) - this particular sound is too loud. BUT there is a caveat to everything I have just written: I am not listening to it on a GREAT set of speakers or even decent headphones. I have a crappy NO NAME BRAND set of PC speakers (they have, like, a 1/3rd inch speaker in them... LOL) with the customary "WOOFER" box. Whilst not the best set of monitoring equipment in the world, they actually aren't THAT bad when listening to CD's/Web Radio/Games/Movies or whatever... But I'm also not saying to run back to the studio and mixdown your track again based on what I've said here because... well, that would be silly.

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There can be a tendency in Dubstep for producers to try and be TOO clever with the edits (beats/bass/synth). I've heard too many Dubstep tracks spoilt because the producers tried to be too clever with the edits and ended up ruining the flow of the song and what's worse is they don't realise it themselves. HOWEVER, I am SO PLEASED to say that this is NOT the case with your track. I REALLY LIKE this. I LOVE what you've done with the bass/synth sound. Very clever, very creative and sounds awesome. I much prefer this to the other track of yours I listened to (the other was named "FAKE"). The other track seemed like it was done by someone else. To me, "FAKE" sounded amateurish and was nowhere near the standard of "DISTURBED" - Keep doing what you're doing though, Mr Simka. I like it.
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