Nice track, altough i think litle modification can make this track real thing.. i suggest you work on that snare and use some equaliser on some parts of melody. also consider rising up the tempo for a little bit, it will be more attractive.
Nice one Storm, keep it up!
on Sergio A - Vive la Vida by sergio81
on Desert Storm by CrissNickssonn
Nice one Storm, keep it up!
good luck