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... *sigh*... Well, "A" for effort I guess.
Use the soundmixer to adjust the volume of each track to your liking. Make each track sound they way they should in accordance to the song, only you know how it should sound.
When splicing in other loops or your own synths make sure they are at the same beat per minute.
Make any song cohesive. Beats, bass lines, lead synths, guitars etc should all work in harmony.
I might sound a bit harsh by saying that there is not much potential here, unless you figure out more of the basics of music composing.
Sorry.

Awesome, but the intro is too damn long... 3 minutes 'til the awesome-ness is just to much.
Make a shorter version and the crowd will love it.
8/10 here buddy, that long intro took away what could have been perfect.