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How about "Sunrise Portinatx". The excitement of the new day. Love being poured on the crowd. Breakfast at the ocean's edge. Kay0s

Hello John. I see this as an interesting backdrop composition to support another form of instrumentation and an incidental vocal, to weave it together as a more holistic track. Maybe a conventional electric guitar or weaving saxophone and a few blurred ahhs from a sorprano to pull in a rhythm. I enjoyed listening but personally I would add to it. Kay0s

I felt musical vibes of Abba and The Mobiles in here. Catchy. Would be an absolute banger with 2 contrasting female vocals doing a repeat phrase. It's a good production as it is but to take it the exceptional level, bring in the vocal. I enjoyed the listen. Kay0s

That soaring,operatic female vocal really offsets the male grit beautifully - adds a layer of pulp fiction type irony - like she's in her own little world, blissfully unaware of what may be lurking. Amazing beat and rhythm. I have never heard anything like this - this is really something! Kay0s

You 2 vocalists harmonise so beautifully. I was reminded of the drum beats in devotional chants in songs such as "Jai Hanuman"by Tim Chalice and Chloe Goodchild. Your grattitude and inspiration shine through very brightly. Perfect guitar music. You sure hit those hight notes - wow! I feel there is maybe a blur between gospel, acapella and soul. Whatever its genre, it is very beautiful. Authentic feelings always shine through on your tracks - BTW, do you record most days? Blessings Kay0s

I love the lightning sound at the beginning and the groove -Kay0s

Danke Oh Mein Gott - This is so darned cool. Your voice gets stronger every time you do a vocal. I love the extra instrumentation that kicks in around 18 seconds after the start of the track. A fabulous contemporary pop opening that would easily equal the likes of something by Shawn Mendes. I also heard echoes of The Cure in there. The bit where you rock out was on fire - Nirvana would've bowed to you! Love this track Kay0s

Your vocal captures the intensity of the futility of the situation, your voice is a perfect fit. Raw but pleasant. When the female vocal came in to join the song, that was a wow moment - she has a beautiful voice that contrasts the raw with the sweet perfectly. Love the beat. Brilliant. Kay0s

Saturday night at Ronnie Scott's club. A reminiscent feeling of the 60s, beehives and Embassy Number 6. Very well composed and enjoyable. Plenty going on without it being chaotic. Nice one. Kay0s

Hello Mr Looperan - interesting track. Instantly I thought of being in space, navigating space hardware and meeting Aliens. I enjoyed listening - a consistent loop goes thruoghout that brings the other incidental components together very well. Kay0s

Love the female vocal opening and the way you amp up the tension with the bazookas. Lots of interesting layers. Kay0s

It would be ace to have an Olivia Newton John type voice on this. Beautiful country twang with guitar at.1.17 and going through track. The beginning reminded me of Eric Clapton's 'Lola'. A decent production. Kay0s

Wowser - gunfire cinematic - The tumbling Tarot Tower tips out the newborn Fool - v dramatic and captures the fear elements of a renaissance v well. Afterall, you are never closer to death than when you are being born or giving birth :) Kay0s

Magical indeed! All the gnomes did dance...I adore your use of strings. Hints of The Nutcracker suite here, too. An emotive blast of brass and huge swerves of laisser faire - simply brilliant! Kay0s

Hendrix meets Muse. The marriage of the soaring guitars over the synth is set to last. Only thing missing is lyrics to add a touch of urgency. Kay0s

It's the croquet on the lawn...It's the carousel at the fayre..It's the twirling ballerina in the music box....Lovley, bright and delightfully twee. I enjoyed listening. Kay0s

Conveys the rambling of the sleepless mind well. Could do with some lyrics to add that punch of frustration. Kay0s

A great beat and a good vocal. The only piece I would tweak is the electronic 'closer' Darth Vader sounding bits - I felt something lighter would fit better there but that's prob just me. Definitely A good dance groove. Kay0s

The perfect marriage of joy, music and inspiring vocal. Beautiful. I adore the beat and addition of the top hat sound here. Kay0s

I don't know alot about the trap genre but I do like this track. It would lend versatility to any number of lyrics and I do like the light vocals you have on here already. Well re-worked. Kay0s PS - pls ignore comment with the typo!

I don't know alot about the trap genre but I do like this track. It would lend veratility to any number of lyrics and I do like the light vocals you have on here already. Well re-worked. Kay0s

Hello - writing here not as a musician but as a lyricist conveying the 'first hit' of reaction, I felt like a bit more percussion around the vocal (and indeed, more vocals around the 3.00 mark), would pull the whole thing together, off-setting and showcasing the overall chill ambience. Very pleasant on the ear - keep going, I enjoyed it - Kay0s

Urban concrete jungle contemplation journey to a Veranda in Spain in a lemon grove - I enjoyed the journey. Kay0s

The reverend of Looperman :-) I like this uplifting song. This can happen when love and art comes together. The voice is mixed nicely and the claps giving the song a very nice room. IMHO talking about Jesus alone puts all the (political) religion by site and just focuses on his "teachings" and love. I like it. Welcome to the group. Cheers, Oli

Hi Richard - very catchy - I found myself singing along to it straight away. The music is a perfect fit. "Bread of Life" is a killer line - I love it - this should be performed live at peace concerts - Kay0s