Arg , me hardy dids thy remix thy track ...May drank a 5th a skeez to dis Argggg , soundin better to mine ear, i would recommend ryhme structure , change-ups etc . arg take me to the 7 seas
Arg me hardies and I twas bobbin ye old heads from bow to stern. This only needs a stronger hook and new title, I was expecting an insightful anthem for underground mc's rallying against the corperate conglomerates in hip-hop. I heard tight flows but lyrically I wanted more of a bigger picture than just we are better mc's than the rest and therefore this is truth .
on Leaving The Past by DeepThought9
on FORGIVE ME MOMMY by REGGAETONKINGZ
on The Truth by Evolution81