def alot better than the other track sounds more electro seems very mixable but did you intend for a radio edit length me personally i like to do edits jobs and a little more tweeking during but that is usually the most time that i allow anyway for a song to play including the mix in and out included in that time.but all in all i like it.
hahah thats harsh bro... b4 saying i dont have a clue i would read some of the other peoples comments who though it was ok or listen to some of my other tracks.
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