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Po5eidon

Po5eidon

Just a black grain of sand on a white windy beach
Tampa and Orlando, United States
Joined : 10th Mar 2011 - 14 years ago
Po5eidon comments on tracks

Po5eidon has posted 24 comments on other peoples tracks.

Comments (24)
Po5eidon
Po5eidon 16th Dec 2012 17:20 - 12 years ago

on Sidestep by doctorcatface
Very slick track. I kinda wanna fight to this. I just wish it had the synth and piano playing at the same time at some point, and that it had a more definitive ending. What's here is very cool, though.
doctorcatface
doctorcatface replied 31st Dec 2012 - 12 years ago
i cannot overstate my appreciation for grounded input, im glad you saw my motive, but am even happier to be given the gift of betterment
and given your talent, even mildly enjoying the track instills me a greater resolve to forge ahead
thank you truly, for your time and more so for your thoughts
Po5eidon
Po5eidon 21st Apr 2012 06:01 - 13 years ago

on Bradd - Dumbstep by BraddFonzerelli
I really liked how it almost started like a trance song and moved into some very cool dubstep. But then it just ends. I was like, "Oh man, it's about to get nasty," and it cut off. What's there is great, though.
Po5eidon
Po5eidon 28th Dec 2011 17:37 - 13 years ago

on Twinkle Twinkle by WongKiShoo
Sweet track. Kinda reminded me of Robert Miles, and not just because of the piano. Really nice.
WongKiShoo
WongKiShoo replied 28th Dec 2011 - 13 years ago
Hey Po5eidon,

Thanks a lot for the props man :)

I'll be checking out some of your stuff in the near future!

Thanks again,

Toonz
Po5eidon
Po5eidon 24th Dec 2011 08:26 - 13 years ago

on Subwoofer Not Included by Skyhunter
Great dubstep in general, but one thing I really like is that, if someone didn't bother reading the description, they might think you were about to lead into some techno or trance beats with the synths you were using at first. I like that little mix and misdirection.

I just started making beats on FL so really haven't figured out the program, yet, but this is why I want to learn it. Dubstep.
Skyhunter
Skyhunter replied 24th Dec 2011 - 13 years ago
Genre mix and mash is fun, even if it's only a little bit of mix.

FL studio is a great program, I really love it. I can't wait to hear what you do with it a month or so down the road!
Po5eidon
Po5eidon 24th Dec 2011 08:16 - 13 years ago

on Flying Soul by imback
Very cool. Good beat and some nice breaks. I like it alot!
Po5eidon
Po5eidon 21st Dec 2011 04:08 - 13 years ago

on Ocean Blue by pokey
I like what's here, but I kind of wish it had a bridge or some little changeup, even if just for a few bars. The cutoff is also a bit sudden. I think fading out would work best here. Very cool track!
pokey
pokey replied 21st Dec 2011 - 13 years ago
Thanks for the advice, a fade out sounds good
Po5eidon
Po5eidon 30th May 2011 01:17 - 14 years ago

on Light In The Darkness by HaruTune
Pretty chill track, nice beat, very cool melody. Almost a classical flavor to some of these bars. Nice job.
HaruTune
HaruTune replied Unknown
Thanx man
Po5eidon
Po5eidon 29th May 2011 08:24 - 14 years ago

on Tonight - Stephanie Kay Ft Jkp by Jasonplufc92
Wish it was a little longer and a little more than just the focus on melody and vocals. What's here is really good, though.
Po5eidon
Po5eidon 1st Apr 2011 18:27 - 14 years ago

on no name by hustlertattoo
Awesome song, and a nice, subtle, steady progression. I love the synths that kick in around or just after the 1:30 mark.
My only big suggestion would be to give it a solid ending; it kind of just drops off. Just go to the end, hit the note a step above the one you end on, and hold it out.
Great stuff!

P.S. Just read your response to the last review, but my suggestion about the ending still stands.
hustlertattoo
hustlertattoo replied Unknown
thanks for the imput man, one of these days ill get bac k to tackes ive started and finish them.
Po5eidon
Po5eidon 25th Mar 2011 00:18 - 14 years ago

on Busted by Dirtysounds
Pretty good stuff. Been thinking of trying out dubstep myself soon. I like what's here, but it could obviously be longer; where it ends now is the perfect spot for a transition.
Dirtysounds
Dirtysounds replied Unknown
Thx man
Your propably right. But in the fl studio demo you cant save your projects, only tracks. tha really sucks but i dont have the money to buy me the full version.
Po5eidon
Po5eidon 19th Mar 2011 01:41 - 14 years ago

on Bipolar by lofthouse
Great mixing, haunting vocals. Shorter tracks are either too long or leave me wanting more, but the length works perfectly for this song. Nice job!
Po5eidon
Po5eidon 15th Mar 2011 02:38 - 14 years ago

on Chanting by Proxy
Nothing to complain about here. Very smooth track, could work in a cinematic setting, and the chant actually took me by surprise in the sense that I was expecting more tenor, less bass; you don't hear the bass singers featured too often, at least I don't.
Nice job!
Proxy
Proxy replied Unknown
thanks for reviewing
Po5eidon
Po5eidon 14th Mar 2011 03:54 - 14 years ago

on D-I-E by SoundBot11
I wouldn't really call this trance; it has more elements of house and chill out, really. Not a fan of the vocals, either.
Other than that, I like it alot, especially the opening melody on the keys. Song sounds kind of like a mini-mix, which is why genre is a little hard to pin down, but overall a really good first start.
Po5eidon
Po5eidon 14th Mar 2011 03:52 - 14 years ago

on Trance Anthem by DJSupernova
Wish the ending trailed off for another second or two, but really cool track here. I like the melody, really good bridge. Keep it up!
Po5eidon
Po5eidon 13th Mar 2011 03:27 - 14 years ago

on The start of something new (intro) by JimeVonLoops
This track is freaking great! Wouldn't really change much of anything. You're 15? On your way, man, keep it up!
JimeVonLoops
JimeVonLoops replied Unknown
haha thanks man :) This review made my day lol. plus some people might not belive how hard it is to loop something u make using just a Hardware REcording system, no software or DJ controller. Man, it took me a while just to figure out that to loop on this thing = the operation "Copy" lol. thanks man :)
Po5eidon
Po5eidon 12th Mar 2011 11:38 - 14 years ago

on House Music all night Long by KrieZaa
Slightly too much talking for my taste; at some point I'm just like, "Okay, let's break it down now." But I AM diggin' the classic sounds.
Po5eidon
Po5eidon 12th Mar 2011 11:33 - 14 years ago

on Do you love me by KrieZaa
Very cool track. I love the minimalism, the vocals, the melody. Pretty chill; it works in both a lounge and dance floor setting. Nice.
Po5eidon
Po5eidon 12th Mar 2011 10:58 - 14 years ago

on Beat with some dirty organ by codymeiser
The hi-hats didn't sound too bad on my end, but oh em gee, percussion is one of my biggest weeknesses, too.
Dig the track. I hope you develop it, make a full-length track.
Po5eidon
Po5eidon 12th Mar 2011 10:53 - 14 years ago

on In The Sky by codymeiser
Beautiful, and I'm already humming the melody just seconds after the track ended. Awesome song.
Po5eidon
Po5eidon 12th Mar 2011 04:21 - 14 years ago

on Raver Girls Are Easy by WhiteSands
A bit repetative, but's rave, so the problem is on my end. Love the title; you can almost picture watching all the girls around the club, almost like a techno vampire. (The melody got me picturing that; I'm not actually a creepfest.) Good work!
Po5eidon
Po5eidon 12th Mar 2011 04:15 - 14 years ago

on Rolling Hard by WhiteSands
Alot brighter than what I expected after reading the title. Very sunshine, happy ending type, and I like it. Synth harmonies were awesome.
Po5eidon
Po5eidon 12th Mar 2011 04:08 - 14 years ago

on Illuminati by WhiteSands
Very smooth track. No real complaints or suggestions. I dig it.
Po5eidon
Po5eidon 12th Mar 2011 04:02 - 14 years ago

on 4 in the morning by WhiteSands
Funny enough, this is usually how I feel around 2, 2:30. The track kind of had that "What now? Just chillin' for a sec." vibe to it. Very cool. Kind of wish it was longer, like instead of fading out it rolled into a transition, but nice job either way.
Po5eidon
Po5eidon 11th Mar 2011 02:57 - 14 years ago

on Elements of Life by OfficialEleX
Nice job! I like this one. I agree with Mixed on changing it up a bit, though it's not really necessary unless you want to make it longer. It's fine for a short track, nice rave element to it with enough to dance to. I especially like the transition into the clapping. My only suggestion would be to cut the boom at the end and just end on the ring of the chromatics, though that's just a personal preference; it doesn't hurt the song if you rather end it this way.
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