Hey the rythm is nice! sounds like a 4/4 + 5/4, but can also count it like 3x 3/4. thats cool. but the thing with the drums is a bit too much, cause the drum samples sound all the same and so it sounds a bit unreal. at 1:10 i'd recommend to change the pitch of the sound you use there by making it an octave higher or lower. this way you get a fuller sound ;)
keep on going with that!
Wow, cool work! I liked how you harmonized this rap and that by playing most instruments by yourself. The Chorus sounds perfectly melancholic with the piano in the back. But the Distortion sound of your guitar could have been a bit fatter - my advice: try to record 2 guitars and set them into a stereo-panorama ;)
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