yea intro is mainly for use by dj's to mix into a set so hopefully you wouldnt hear much of it during a club mix but im glad you liked the track! thanks for the listen.
Not really into god or anything like I noticed you replied on everyones reviews,but great track you have a great voice no matter where you got it from or who gave it to you haha
Try turning down the volume of your vox. and maybe slow down the tempo of the techno before you try and spit over it unless you can truly spit fast. Or just find a more fitting beat. Nice job tho, I can't hate a man for trying to rap and put his feelings in a rap. Kepp it up and keep learning and improving
Sick hook and beat and great rapping man. I love it the way it is, def download. nice pic too haha. Maybe just try and step up the lyrical wordplay or something a bit or try a double time. But great job
thanks dude, yeah it was kinda of a sample putting rock with synths but slamming a metal vibe in it just so you get that crazed feeling out of no where.
The only thing I didn't like was the kinda obnoxious "yeahh"'s in the beginning, but I liked the thoughtful lyrics and the aggressive flow and nice hook. Did you do both? And check me out, I'm all about the thoughtful lyrics too
sick breakdown ar 1:40ish, reminded me of daft punk in Tron. Like Derezzed or something. Maybe go for some drums in the intro or some sampling, maybe some cool vocals. I could probaly help you out if ya need something, or just try and go for a shorter, more fastly progressing intro.
Nice job man, keep it up
-Dan
I need to make the drums thicker overall, but I purposely went for a more ominous intro. And yeah, I think I was listening to alot of "Tron: Legacy" soundtrack around the time I did this one.
Thanks for the review. Glad you liked it.
Sick beat man, I love the sharp snare and the guitar in the background? And the synthish sound fading in and out at like 1:20 is cool too. Did you find all the loops on here?
Keep it up.
-Dan
Great positive track man, ur pic is rele fitting haha. Imma try and spit on this soon. Im kinda busy, but I'll def try and write soe stuffand make it work with no chorus. Thanks bro
Nice track man, but I wish it had progressed a little faster and gotten a little more in my face. That's kinda what I like in grime and dubstep, when I'm surprised by the sound
Ok beat, I like the unorthodox beat but you're gonna need some really strong vocals for it to be any good. And the tone and content has to be kinda dark I think, this has a funeral organ feel to it.
sick beat and nice flow. Usually I don't like UK rapping, no offense, it's just something bout the light pitched accent. But I like this it sounds dirty and matched the beat. Check me out for some raps
Thank yoy for passing by, your review means to me sometimes i feel like that music from the past brings those times back so, I enjoy playing my guitar that kind of genre
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Thanks for the review. Glad you liked it.
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