Inthelifeofanartist

I like the spirit of the song. Very up beat. I like your playing. The timing is off. You will get it down the road. Practice Practice. Singing needs to be projected out more so the words are more clear, easier to understand. I like the feel of the song, sometimes that is the most important thing for a recording artists.
Keep trying. Sometime keep trying on your recording in different ways, less echo to your voice, position the mic differently, many things you can do to change how you record, and how it sounds after its recorded to how it plays. Keep up the good work.
Try and practice.

Hey BigD I really like your track. The sounds are very good. Motif Keyboard is a good keyboard. I Like how you started out rapping. Later not so much. Keep up what you did in the starting verse. Timing and speak louder with more conviction. That would be very helpful. All in all the track sounds like Biggie Smalls.
Keep working on the beats and post more beats. Hope to hear more soon.