Pro's:
I like the piano loop as well, and the synth later adds a nice, subtle touch. The rhythm of the verse flows pretty well too. Your voice (assuming it's you) was clean and I liked the very subtle reverb (I think).
Constructive Criticism:
As I'm sure you know, the song starts to lose stem as it goes; it just sounds unfinished which again, I'm sure you're aware of! :)
I would also say that this needs some sort of chorus and perhaps even a bridge or something to break it up as it gets very repetitive after a while.
The production sounded clean though and although I'm not near my monitor speakers, it sounded well-put-together.!
on Must getting closer by 7th
The changes are nice...it almost has a sort of "Beck" feel to it which is a huge compliment because I've always been impressed with Beck's detail.
Keep at it!
Mike
7th
on Make You Mine by Poetry71
I like the piano loop as well, and the synth later adds a nice, subtle touch. The rhythm of the verse flows pretty well too. Your voice (assuming it's you) was clean and I liked the very subtle reverb (I think).
Constructive Criticism:
As I'm sure you know, the song starts to lose stem as it goes; it just sounds unfinished which again, I'm sure you're aware of! :)
I would also say that this needs some sort of chorus and perhaps even a bridge or something to break it up as it gets very repetitive after a while.
The production sounded clean though and although I'm not near my monitor speakers, it sounded well-put-together.!